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simonpham:
Could somebody please check out my essay and tell me what I should be writing next and to give me some feedback? Thank you so much.
Lottie99:
--- Quote from: simonpham on October 07, 2016, 11:32:14 am ---Could somebody please check out my essay and tell me what I should be writing next and to give me some feedback? Thank you so much.
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Hey fam,
First up I'd start with the structure of your essay, you've got good ideas but you have to plan it out in a way that clarifies them. Have a topic sentence for each paragraph that really answers the question. Give an insight about it thats clear. Why does fulfilment matter? What is it about needing fulfilment that is so inherently human?
And then plan out your paragraphs that go deeply into that with clear textual analysis that backs up your point.
simonpham:
Thank you :) :)
rachelle1:
Hey can anyone help me with this point i have made for a pride and prejudice social class paragraph. I have written this :
Austen’s use of exploring the class of the gentry, allows her to contrast the situation between individuals of the same class but different levels. This is shown through the contrast of the different financial positions of Elizabeth and Darcy. Although they differ in financial security their equality in class is shown through Elizabeths comment that “He is a gentleman; I am a gentleman's daughter; so far we are equal.” It is evident through this, that by birth and character they are both social equals.
But im not sure whether this is actually correct or not. Any help would be appreciated.
edmododragon:
--- Quote from: simonpham on October 07, 2016, 11:32:14 am ---Could somebody please check out my essay and tell me what I should be writing next and to give me some feedback? Thank you so much.
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Also, discussing some of the techniques used in the texts and their effect can be helpful in making your argument sound more sophisticated and it'll help fill in spaces where you would otherwise be retelling the plot
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