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Thesis statement feedback and discussion thread
alyssastama:
--- Quote from: jamonwindeyer on October 06, 2016, 11:22:13 am ---Hey Alyssa! I love it, I think that provided you subsequently examine what precise values/paradigms you are referencing, then you are golden. This links to the module well and sets up your argument nicely! Again, make sure you give us more clarification with regard to what social paradigms/values you are talking about in the next sentence(s) :) :)
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Thank you so much! I think that I do... if it comes in through my topic sentence/context does that work?
alyssastama:
Thank you so much! I think that I do... if it comes in through my topic sentence/context does that work?
Thank you so much for all the work you do for us on here!! Sorry for another post, but I was also wondering if my Discovery thesis works?
We do Bill Bryson's A Short History of Nearly Everything and its quite a difficult test to create an overall thesis for!
My related text is the Lost Thing. :)
"For the individual, discovery is a concept that provokes a re evaluation of pervasive understandings, offering new insight into life and humanity. This is especially true when re evaluation is prompted by challenging or adverse situations. If met with flexibility, the renewed perspective from these discoveries can positively shape is as human beings and the world around us."
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jamonwindeyer:
--- Quote from: alyssastama on October 06, 2016, 11:28:24 am ---Thank you so much for all the work you do for us on here!! Sorry for another post, but I was also wondering if my Discovery thesis works?
We do Bill Bryson's A Short History of Nearly Everything and its quite a difficult test to create an overall thesis for!
My related text is the Lost Thing. :)
"For the individual, discovery is a concept that provokes a re evaluation of pervasive understandings, offering new insight into life and humanity. This is especially true when re evaluation is prompted by challenging or adverse situations. If met with flexibility, the renewed perspective from these discoveries can positively shape is as human beings and the world around us."
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That's no problem!! Happy to be of help! ;D
As long as it comes through somewhere, you are okay. I'm not quite getting it in what I see there, I'd expect you to introduce some more detail in the introduction and then really flesh it out in your body paragraphs!!
That AoS one is picture perfect, I wouldn't add anything to that, jump into introducing your texts and establishing your paragraph arguments!! ;D
Nicki:
hi!
i was hoping i could get some advice on my these statement for my discovery essay :) would be much appreciated
was also wondering if its too specific?
thesis:
It is the power of discoveries in being able to confront an individual’s intrinsic values and beliefs which allow them to physically and mentally transform an individual’s perception of themselves and their surrounding world.
CaitlinSavins:
Hello! I've been a massive nerd and spent more studying than socialising but the good news is that I already have some idea of what my thesis will be about :)
Discoveries often act as catalysts for the cultivation of maturity in an individual’s life. This growth is stimulated by evocative discoveries, both deliberate and unforeseen, made within the paradigms of emotion, intellect and spiritualism, and grants the individual the lucidity to challenge and question their past perspectives.
Is this clear and to the point? How can I improve it?
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