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Fergus6748:
Hey guys, I had a quick q about form in a creative piece. Personally I'm not much into creative writing and generally opt for the short story jsut because it's familiar. I'm looking to try writing a speech for my creative, any tips on how I could approach that?

beatroot:

--- Quote from: Fergus6748 on August 07, 2018, 08:39:44 pm ---Hey guys, I had a quick q about form in a creative piece. Personally I'm not much into creative writing and generally opt for the short story jsut because it's familiar. I'm looking to try writing a speech for my creative, any tips on how I could approach that?

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Hey there! You can check out this guide that Elyse wrote :)

Jemima w:
Hey!! if i were to answer the 2017 paper 1 question, "Whether motivated by need, wonder or curiosity, discovery has the power to be transformative", would these thesis statements be appropriate/ which of the two is strongest? 

While motivations may vary, discoveries stimulate new ideas and renewed perceptions. Thus, the process of discovery enables a transformation of perspective which is integral to the cultivation of a rich understanding of ourselves and the world.

Discoveries stimulate new ideas and renewed perceptions, thus enabling a transformation of perspective which is integral to a rich understanding of ourselves and the world. However, the extent of this transformation is reliant upon receptive motivations such as need, wonder or curiosity.

Thanku!!!!:)

jamonwindeyer:

--- Quote from: Jemima w on August 08, 2018, 09:56:53 pm ---Hey!! if i were to answer the 2017 paper 1 question, "Whether motivated by need, wonder or curiosity, discovery has the power to be transformative", would these thesis statements be appropriate/ which of the two is strongest? 

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Welcome to the forums Jemima! ;D

Both work, but I personally think the second is stronger because it proposes more of its own idea as well. Like, your Thesis incorporates the question, but it doesn't totally rely on it - You've spun it to make it yours. So I think it works better for that reason ;D

Jemima w:
what the hell that was so quick thankyou

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