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Explain the legal rights and obligations of parents and children

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mylinh-nguyen:
I don't know how to start my thesis statement with this, like I'm used to those ones starting with assess/evaluate
'Explain the legal rights and obligations of parents and children, including those derived from international law'

any help would be appreciated :)

jamonwindeyer:

--- Quote from: mylinh-nguyen on June 26, 2017, 11:30:03 pm ---I don't know how to start my thesis statement with this, like I'm used to those ones starting with assess/evaluate
'Explain the legal rights and obligations of parents and children, including those derived from international law'

any help would be appreciated :)

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Hey! Perhaps you could start with something about why such laws are important? Why we need these legal rights and responsibilities in place to protect families? :) a bit of a justification can lead nicely into a layout of your topics - Essays like this suck though, because it's really just asking for facts! Don't worry, a question like this is the HSC is pretty unlikely ;D

mylinh-nguyen:

--- Quote from: jamonwindeyer on June 26, 2017, 11:58:33 pm ---Hey! Perhaps you could start with something about why such laws are important? Why we need these legal rights and responsibilities in place to protect families? :) a bit of a justification can lead nicely into a layout of your topics - Essays like this suck though, because it's really just asking for facts! Don't worry, a question like this is the HSC is pretty unlikely ;D

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so could I mention something how such laws are important in the event of a family breakdown and how these laws safeguard the rights and obligations for both parents and children?

jamonwindeyer:

--- Quote from: mylinh-nguyen on June 27, 2017, 01:08:11 am ---so could I mention something how such laws are important in the event of a family breakdown and how these laws safeguard the rights and obligations for both parents and children?

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Yeah that sounds good! So like, "Family breakdowns are an extremely sensitive issue, and the law needs to protect all parties involved. Let's discuss those safeguards." ;D at least, that's how I'd personally approach it :)

mylinh-nguyen:

--- Quote from: jamonwindeyer on June 27, 2017, 01:14:17 am ---Yeah that sounds good! So like, "Family breakdowns are an extremely sensitive issue, and the law needs to protect all parties involved. Let's discuss those safeguards." ;D at least, that's how I'd personally approach it :)

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okay thanks heaps!

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