Society and Culture

[Music2050]

Hi ATARNotes,
I keep getting feedback from my teachers saying to incorporate more of my primary research into my PIP but I'm finding it hard to synthesise this with my secondary research. Can you please give me some tips and starter sentences on how to incorporate it into my PIP better?

I keep saying writing things like "In question number 3 this was asked blah blah blah and the respondents answers were blah blah", I know it's wrong but I don't know how else to do it. ATAR Notes Help!

Thank you 

[kiiaaa]

Hi ATARNotes,
I keep getting feedback from my teachers saying to incorporate more of my primary research into my PIP but I'm finding it hard to synthesize this with my secondary research. Can you please give me some tips and starter sentences on how to incorporate it into my PIP better?

I keep saying writing things like "In question number 3 this was asked blah blah blah and the respondent's answers were blah blah", I know it's wrong but I don't know how else to do it. ATAR Notes Help!

Thank you 

hey as a fellow pip writer you can say something like this as that is how I've been doing mine (sorry for the very lame example it was the best way for me to sort of show how I would say)
- when asking respondents on their favorite ice cream flavor, a majority of the responses (optional to add a statistic but it will make it look stronger) mentioned chocolate while only 5% of responses said strawberry, thus displaying that chocolate ice cream has continued to be a favorite icecream through out time.

hope that helps. That is how im doing mine rn and it seems the least clunky way to do it

[shamus.clarke]

Are the PIPs due on the same date for each class in NSW? Mine is due on the 31st and I'm wondering if it's the same for anyone else.

[beatroot]

Are the PIPs due on the same date for each class in NSW? Mine is due on the 31st and I'm wondering if it's the same for anyone else.

Yes, all PIPs are due on July 31 for everyone in NSW. Must be submitted to your teacher electronically, no later than 3pm!! (or it depends on your teacher, I have to submit mine by 9am)

[kiiaaa]

Yes, all PIPs are due on July 31 for everyone in NSW. Must be submitted to your teacher electronically, no later than 3 pm!! (or it depends on your teacher, I have to submit mine by 9 am)

yeah some schools are a tad different but yes every student in NSW doing SAC must hand it in before 3 pm on the 31st but your school can have certain requirements of its own. this is as so the teachers can go over the pips quickly to ensure no plagiarism/ all sections are there )

[Daniyahasan]

anyone doing CAFS?