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Cassidyhogi

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Essay Pls mark :)
« on: October 16, 2017, 05:36:49 pm »
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This is an "Argument Analysis" essay from Lauren's exam (2015 Exam 1 Section C)

Eternally grateful in advance ;)
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Re: Essay Pls mark :)
« Reply #1 on: October 16, 2017, 06:19:21 pm »
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sure will be done in a bit
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Re: Essay Pls mark :)
« Reply #2 on: October 16, 2017, 06:37:20 pm »
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Re: Essay Pls mark :)
« Reply #3 on: October 16, 2017, 07:18:58 pm »
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Thank you!
Yeah I always forget to mention tone and the visual. So i end up not mentioning both or sliding in a sentence or two towards the end.
In the study design for English it says to "critique ideas presented in arguments" so that is why I concluded my essay the way I did...

Thank you so much!
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Re: Essay Pls mark :)
« Reply #4 on: October 16, 2017, 10:06:22 pm »
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Considering critique (from Google) means:
1) a detailed analysis and assessment of something, especially a literary, philosophical or political theory.
2) evaluate (a theory or a practice) in a detailed and analytical way.
I think it's best to stay neutral on analysing argument, as critique doesn't carry the same meaning as criticism.
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Re: Essay Pls mark :)
« Reply #5 on: October 16, 2017, 10:09:23 pm »
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Oh okay then. Thanks for this, really appreciate it ;D
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