OK SO HERE IT GOES:
Section 1: Really thankful I discovered that Events to Armistice dot point as it made up the majority of my info I used for Question 7. For the MC I had:
1. D, 2. B, 3. C (I personally had C here Susie as I couldn't see how it related to B - I think I get your explanation but at the same time I can't see the tactical success in Source B so I'm also not 100% at all haha). 4. A, 5. Woodrow Wilson, 6. Just contrasted Wilson's idealistic aims as shown in the source + own knowledge of 14 points vs Clemenceau's want for revenge and all victorious allies to punish Germany as in source + own knowledge of stats he wanted like 25,000 machine guns surrendered by Germans and reparations.
Question 7: Source C: I contrasted the Somme, where tanks were used ineffectively with Amiens where 552 tanks, 800 aircraft, artillery fire was all used in coordination with each other and how this demonstrated the change of tactics over time and how it was successful as 24,000 POW captured in 3 days. Also looked at Hamel for Source D and how 60 Mark V tanks were used with 600 guns and how tanks were used more effectively again also alluding to the developments eg. they now carry cribs. Referred to how as a result of all these battles combined and the change in tactics, able to break impenetrable Hindenburg Line and war over. That was that in essence

Question 8: Okay - I think I was an idiot here and off memory wrote both sources were partially useful when Source A is limited. Would I lose a mark for this? For Source A I said it was useful in that it provided historians with an idea into how propaganda was used on the American home front for rationing (used the stat of u boats sinking 500000 tonnes here) and thus demonstrating how America was a helpful ally contrasting this with Germany's allies who didn't even break through one line from 1914-1917. I said it was limited in that it didn't show the impact of propaganda and whether it actually did lead to German collapse/Allied victory. Also did perspective American Govt. and thus highly reliable as evidence of propaganda used. From that brief summary of what I wrote, do you think they would still mark me down for partially useful rather than of limited use? For Source B I did partially as while Hindenburg discussed some good reasons eg. lack of manpower following Ludendorff Offensive, lack of resources, bad morale, he was writing a memoir and thus could have steered the failure of the war away from his own failings as commander and towards other reasons. Also said it lacked specifics/details and brought in some of my own to show how it would be more reliable.
SECTION 2 - GERMANYSo for both Germany and Pacific I feel like I picked the worse question haha! Although for Germany, seeing I would have argued not total control, I would have had to have known opposition to Germany to almost everything, including propaganda which would have been hard. If anyone who did Germany can look at what I wrote for To what extent the Depression contributed to the rise of the Nazis that would be great! So basically my structure was:
1. Depression allowed for the desperate environment/atmosphere in which the Nazis thrived. Nazis had used their nationalistic/broad appeal since 1920s yet most effective during crisis eg. Depression. Nazis rise from 2.7% vote in may 1928 to 37.3% in july 1932. Therefore depression moderately contributed to rise in short-term.
2. Then I discussed how in terms of short term reasons for its rise, the Nazis actually dropped off from july-november 1932 by 4% and were losing support, therefore proving depression wasn’t overly significant in ultimately bringing them to power. Instead, the political miscalculations of bruning, von papen, von schliecher etc. ultimately brought hitler and Nazis to power.
3. There were long-term reasons for their rise as well. Focussed on Treaty of Versailles and how hitler and nazi party initially took advantage of disillusioned germans to convince them with the signing of the TOV, it “will ruin the german nation.” So basically that the Nazis took advantage of the early illegitimacy of the republic to establish themselves.
4. Linked to this discussed how the constitution in proportional representation and article 48 allowed the Nazis to work within the system and yet against it and eventually rise to power.
Interested to hear thoughts!
PERSONALITY – SpeerMy most confident section out of the paper.
3 events I discussed were:
1. Meeting with hanke and how this gave him his first jobs in the nazi party as architect.
2. Appointment as first architect (international prominence at world fair and Germania eg.)
3. Appointment as Armaments minister (discuss stats on his efficiency eg. 250% increase munitions 1942-1944 and increase guns and ammunitions output by 27% and 97% respectively and how this was significant given allies more prepared for war with Germany only having 25% munitions of allies in 1942)
Part b
A nice take on the shaper/shaped by events type question.
Argued
hitler's (I literally wrote Hitler 3-4 times instead of speer and kept having to cross it out because i did personality after germany haha!!) significance moderately influenced by his contribution to change eg.
Change
Work in transforming armaments ministry with efficiency etc.
Changed public perceptions of himself at Nuremberg trials by going against other Nazis who wanted to idolise hitler thus impact his significance in history
Not change
Took advantage of existing german values of volksgemeinschaft and its sense of permanence and dominance in the success/significance of his architecture eg. Germany stadium and Nuremberg rallies as propaganda
Took advantage of existing ideology r.e other races inferior through exclusion of jews in jew flats and exploitation of slave labour in order to profit his efficiency and therefore significance in war effort
CONFLICT IN THE PACIFIC Ok – so I really feel like I should have done option B. It was way easier to write heaps about and I knew thousands of stats. However, I was scared off by the idea of someone like Bruce Dennett marking my work with years of experience in military strategy since that’s the bit I was lacking in understanding – how specifically the Japanese failed militarily etc.
So I went with a) Assess the effect of conflict in pacific on civilians in occupied territories.
I was definitely 100% comfortable with writing this – thesis being that the effect varied according to how each occupied territory aided the war effort so being:
PARA 1: Malaya – military significance – little care for human safety – destructive impact
PARA 2: Dutch east indies – natural resources – slave labour – significant impact too
Para 3: Thailand – little significance and collaboration from thai govt. – some economic sanctions – yet escaped much of destruction
Only one qualm on this – I put one statistic in the dutch east indies para instead of Malaya – reckon ill lose a mark for this or the markers wont even notice haha
SORRY FOR THE LONG POST but that is me done – just wanted to hear people’s thoughts!
Hope everyone did well!