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theyam:
Hi rasha25,

Wow, how harsh was the marking criteria that you only got a 10/15 ?? For me, my Ext1. essay and creatives were marked out of 25 and this one got a 20. Oh, your AOS sounds a bit scientific considering it is English XD

From theyam :)

rasha25:

--- Quote from: theyam on December 24, 2017, 02:26:04 pm ---Hi rasha25,

Wow, how harsh was the marking criteria that you only got a 10/15 ?? For me, my Ext1. essay and creatives were marked out of 25 and this one got a 20. Oh, your AOS sounds a bit scientific considering it is English XD

From theyam :)

--- End quote ---

Yes sadly science haunts me....  :( but I digress :)
I am so speechless after reading your creative, my gosh that story was wow. Its kinda funny coz I wanted to make my creative about a discovery in the garden of a womens house but remembered my creative from year 11 that I had and thought I'd build on that.

Your story was very descriptive and well written, the only critic I had was with the first few sentences but other than that I really enjoyed reading it. You should definitely check with your teacher if you can use it for discovery.

~Good luck  :)

theyam:
Hi rasha25

First of all SO SORRY FOR THIS LATE REPLY, there's been a lot of family parties this week XD
Thank you very much for your critique!! What module are you doing for Extension 1 by the way?

Happy New Year!!
From theyam :)

rasha25:
Hi, that's totally fine hope you enjoyed Xmas and New Year :)

I don't do extension English, used to. As for Extension History, we have covered the topic of what is history and looked into our major work as well as the historians like Von Rank and Herodotus and we also explored our debate topic which is the Black Armed Debate. My proposal for my major is due second week back to school :(

Do you do Extension History? 

theyam:
"Hi, that's totally fine hope you enjoyed Xmas and New Year :)

I don't do extension English, used to. As for Extension History, we have covered the topic of what is history and looked into our major work as well as the historians like Von Rank and Herodotus and we also explored our debate topic which is the Black Armed Debate. My proposal for my major is due second week back to school :(

Do you do Extension History? "

Oh ok, we've also explored different historians too for that topic! We haven't done that debate though, what is it about? In class we instead watched a film about the Holocaust debate? Woah, my proposal was due wk 5 of term 4, yours is due pretty late compared to mine XD What's your major work about?

From theyam :)

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