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2018 AA Club - Week 2

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MissSmiley:

--- Quote from: clarke54321 on January 10, 2018, 10:29:08 am ---Fantastic job at revising your piece! Re-reading and re-working your own writing can be one of the most beneficial things to do in English. So well-done on your diligence  :) To keep improving, cut down on sentences with multiple clauses. Given the sheer length of these sentences, your train of thought sometimes becomes obfuscated and confused. And this is a real shame, because your ideas are often highly original. But never fear, with adequate time and practice, this issue will become long lost :D 

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Thank you so so much!! I really appreciate you giving your time to help me Clarke!!
Thanks a lot! :)

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