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Victorious:
Hello,
I was wondering if anybody would be able to give feedback on my first draft essay. There is not introduction or conclusion just 2 paragraphs, the 'introduction' sentence is only to remind me of where i was trying to go with my essay.

Any feedback is very much appreciated,
Thank you,
Victoria

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--- Quote from: Victorious on January 15, 2018, 07:59:41 am ---Hello,
I was wondering if anybody would be able to give feedback on my first draft essay. There is not introduction or conclusion just 2 paragraphs, the 'introduction' sentence is only to remind me of where i was trying to go with my essay.

Any feedback is very much appreciated,
Thank you,
Victoria

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Hello, Victoria.

I'd strongly encourage you to upload your essay in a brand new topic to get individual feedback on your own thread. You may do so here. In the meantime, someone may come along and give you some pointers.

Thanks!

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