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Brainstorming for my story needed!

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jamonwindeyer:

--- Quote from: celinedeus on March 30, 2018, 11:39:01 pm ---Hi Jamon! So I've been attempting to write my creative all day today and I'm really struggling to develop a concept.  :-\ This is the hardest part for me and I really cannot think of a moral for a story, nor an actual story! Do you have any ideas on where I can go from my initial paragraph?? I want the character to discover something through her Mum and her Mum's love for ballet and the world of ballet that she was raised it (it's beautiful and regal and just transformative) but I have absolutely no idea what she can discover ughhhhh!

Thank you so much for helping btw!

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Happy to help! Try to think types of discoveries. So for example, a physical discovery - Maybe she discovers (or is dealing with the discovery) that she is physically incapable of emulating her mother, due to a disability or an injury or _______. Brainstorm around this and the other types to get you going maybe?

dcesaona:

--- Quote from: jamonwindeyer on March 31, 2018, 12:10:35 am ---Happy to help! Try to think types of discoveries. So for example, a physical discovery - Maybe she discovers (or is dealing with the discovery) that she is physically incapable of emulating her mother, due to a disability or an injury or _______. Brainstorm around this and the other types to get you going maybe?

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Ok, I have taken your word and have come up with this! So, as a child she was inspired by her mother's dancing and was swept up in ballet. However, as she grew up, she realised that her 'passion' for ballet was only for watching it and appreciating it, not for actually doing it. So basically she stands on the same stage that her mum did (when she watched her as a small child) but she discovers how it's not the life she wants and she walks off. I feel like the concept is quite underdeveloped and rough - is there any way I can work on it?? Also, do you think it's okay?

Thanks!  :)

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