Oral speech

[Perla]

Hi,

I have written a speech for my oral presentation but I'm really not sure about its quality. I was wondering if someone could read it and give me some advice or corrections. (I cannot post it  online because for plagiarism issues or i don't know what my teacher was meaning but it will be no problem to send it).

Thank you  very much

Perla

[patriciarose]

if you message me it privately i’ll be happy to read over it (:

but last time i posted something like this i got people asking me to write theirs for them and a) that’s collusion, b) it’s annoying, and c) no. hopefully that’s not too unreasonable (: