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Hey can someone provide me with some feed back on my short response :D

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24221:
Assess the legal response on one contemporary human rights issue. (7mark)
thank you!

fantasticbeasts3:
Hi!

I don't have much to say about this as I think your response is already amazing! You've provided a ton of relevant examples which back up your argument. I've pointed out a few expression issues which kinda disrupt the flow of your writing, but other than that, there's not really much I can comment on.

24221:
Thank you!!
but i feel like i am lacking some domestic legal response, some of my friends are telling me to put in cases, but finding case in south Sudan is quite hard to do 

fantasticbeasts3:

--- Quote from: 24221 on November 17, 2018, 11:57:37 am ---Thank you!!
but i feel like i am lacking some domestic legal response, some of my friends are telling me to put in cases, but finding case in south Sudan is quite hard to do 

--- End quote ---

No worries, my pleasure!

With human rights I didn’t really use domestic legislation. I don’t think you need a lot of it (if any) to get full marks :-) Don’t worry too much about what your friends say lol

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