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Please help edit/give feedback on my personal essay! Much appreciated :)

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SarahEve :
Hi!! Any notes would be appreciated! Thanks!

yourfriendlyneighbourhoodghost:

--- Quote from: SarahEve  on November 06, 2019, 09:26:14 pm ---Hi!! Any notes would be appreciated! Thanks!

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Hey

I thought it was quite engaging and thought-provoking. Just some minor expression errors like in the intro you have 'is' repeated twice, other than that I really enjoyed it (:

SarahEve :

--- Quote from: yourfriendlyneighbourhoodghost on November 07, 2019, 08:50:25 am ---Hey

I thought it was quite engaging and thought-provoking. Just some minor expression errors like in the intro you have 'is' repeated twice, other than that I really enjoyed it (:

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Thank you! Thanks for helping me with grammar :)

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