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twelftholmes:
the question is "Account for Athens' changing relations with her allies during this period."

Here is my essay: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17UpWase6ZUSlVKQ1QMqNezjKLc09LrdUCG2Fl1eXLlU/edit?usp=sharing

I would be grateful for any feedback, particularly on the structure and depth of analysis. Also what type of mark this might give me in the HSC (if I could replicate the same kinda thing in the exam). Thanks in advance!

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