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[English] Herald Sun editorial + Rob Oakeshott opinion language analysis

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pi:
Thanks a lot! Definitely agree with the comments.

Need less techniques and greater analysis of important ones (hence the bad 1000 word length...). I can now also see some parts to be quite generic/formulaic :(  Lots of room to improve!

werdna:
Oh and Burberry, the work thread actually specified people do Week 4's analysis as ONLINE articles.

pi:

--- Quote from: werdna on February 07, 2011, 09:31:01 pm ---Oh and Burberry, the work thread actually specified people do Week 4's analysis as ONLINE articles.

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That's what confused me in that long vid/poll para... Never done an online one before :(

burbs:

--- Quote from: werdna on February 07, 2011, 09:31:01 pm ---Oh and Burberry, the work thread actually specified people do Week 4's analysis as ONLINE articles.

--- End quote ---

Oh shit you are completely right, I apologise man. I had read some other peoples briefly before and one said they were not analysing the video + got confused with the week 3.

Sorry pi!

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