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Title: shinny's VCE English Prep Course - quality tuition by an experienced tutor!
Post by: shinny on November 25, 2010, 06:43:41 pm
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Unfortunately I have stopped offering this service due to having commenced full-time employment. If you wish to learn my methods, please purchase the ExamPro VCE English 3/4 Study Guide instead which I wrote by following the eStore link above.

Summary
My name's Andrew and I graduated in 2008 from Melbourne High School with an ENTER score (as it was known back then) of 99.70. I am now in my fifth and final year of studying Medicine/Surgery at Monash University and have been providing tuition part time ever since I graduated, giving me over 4 years of tutoring experience.

The sessions I am conducting are basically one-on-one, once-off sessions running for 3 hours. These sessions will cover the entire mainstream English course right through from how to prepare during the summer, over the course of the year, just before the exam to examination strategy for the day of the exam itself.

They will take a very focused approach with roughly an hour spent on each section of the exam - the text response, context and language analysis - explaining how to prepare in terms of content, but perhaps more importantly to many, also exactly how to write it. This is particularly important because as I'm sure many of you will begin to realise next year, funnily enough, many English teachers at school don't actually teach you how to write! I'll be teaching my formulaic style of writing which I know many prefer - especially those maths/science students like myself - as it basically simplifies and solidifies both the structure and expression elements of essay writing. By providing a deep insight into what I've identified largely as the three key elements of VCE English - structure, content and expression - you will find a much more structured approach towards writing and studying in VCE English.

I can virtually cover any text as I teach quite a generalised system which can be adapted to any text. Regardless, I am familiar with most of the popular texts and have been providing examples for my students throughout my explanations. For context, I can teach any of the four as I have taught them all at some point.

The previous set of notes which I used throughout 2011 have sparked much acclaim and praise from my previous students. As a result of this, they have since been published in early 2012 as the ATARNotes VCE English Study Guide. This study guide will be provided free of charge with any full sessions conducted. The study guide summarises everything that will be covered on the day, allowing you to easily revise any of the content later in the year by yourself, whilst also avoiding the need to take your own notes for the 3 hours. It also contains pieces of work written by myself which scored 10/10 as marked by VCAA examiners, together with examples from other students who scored 50 in English, as well as comprehensive lists of vocabulary and phrases that I used myself which you can simply integrate into your own writing.

Any additional time remaining in the sessions can be used for you to attempt to apply the methods that you will learn and immediately get feedback, or even just discuss any of my other subjects (Biology, Business Management, Methods, Spesh, Chemistry with their respective study scores in my forum signature) and how to prepare for them, or for you to ask questions regarding the UMAT and Medicine course itself. Advice on organising study plans and strategies has also been a popular option.



Pricing and Location
For these sessions, I will be charging $150 for each 3 hour session. While seemingly quite pricey, keep in mind that I am practically teaching everything I know within the one session, as opposed to some other tutors which 'reserve' their knowledge until later in the year to force you to keep coming back.

Read my endorsements below and over here from students who have attended my sessions to get an idea of how others have found my program. Remember to take such things into account when choosing a tutoring program and not just blindly looking at study scores. Having conducted over 100 of these sessions already without any dissatisfied customers over the last few years, I am confident in my abilities to provide a quality and cost-effective tuition experience.

The sessions can be held at the State Library, Box Hill Library, Glen Waverley Library or my residence in Doncaster East. Glen Waverley and Box Hill are recommended due to the availability of private study rooms. There is also the option for me to drive to your place (preferably south-eastern suburbs), but additional charges may apply for travelling time and petrol costs if the distance is quite far (beyond 30 minutes drive). So if you're interested either PM me on this site or e-mail me on [email protected] with your details to be placed on the waiting list (see news/updates above for instructions). Alternatively, call me on 0433 599 303 and I'll discuss with you when would work best. Contact me for further details regarding this. Lastly, I carry a current Police Check and Working With Children Check for my university course, so both of these can be sighted upon request.



Guarantee
Lastly, since I know that many students and parents are skeptical of student tutors, once again as a guarantee I'll offer a 1 hour 'grace' period where if you're not satisfied with what you're receiving within the first hour, you can just walk out and not pay a cent. However, after having conducted over 100 sessions already, no students have used this yet so hopefully you'll be equally as satisfied as they have been. Hope to hear from you!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: werdna on November 25, 2010, 07:22:20 pm
Endorsed. Will be going to this program over the holidays! :D
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: shinny on December 05, 2010, 05:26:32 pm
I've had some questions about the notes that will be supplied so basically they are quite extensive, spanning 50 pages and 17 000 words and will cover everything which will be said on the day, plus more. These notes are very important as they allow you to revisit and revise all the content which will be covered in the session at a later date, as it is obviously impossible for you to remember everything come exam time just in a three and a half hour session held in the Summer. I've attached some pictures of the book and as you can see, they from now on will be fully bound as well. Due to the time and costs of getting them professionally bound, I am actually thinking of raising the price for sessions held later next year after the Summer (if any), so let me know if you're interested as soon as possible to secure yourself a Summer place and save yourself some money!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: werdna on December 05, 2010, 08:24:23 pm
Wow, the resources look pretty good! How long did it take to compile all that into one?
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: vwinnie8 on December 05, 2010, 08:25:44 pm
im interested in this :D sounds very nice.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: shinny on December 05, 2010, 08:35:35 pm
Wow, the resources look pretty good! How long did it take to compile all that into one?

Countless hours. Started off in 2008 when I wrote the initial copy of the book over one week, spending about 4-5 hours each night after uni to get it ready in time for the mid-semester break. I've made several minor revisions since then until over the last two weeks over which I did a complete re-read and edited the entire thing, tidied up the presentation and so on.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Keo on December 07, 2010, 05:57:19 pm
Endorsed! Just had my session today and what can I say it was awesome :)
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Moamen on December 09, 2010, 02:56:16 am
I did a lesson with shinny and it was fantastic. It gave me exactly what i wanted which was a structured approach towards vce english. He also put an emphasis in areas which i wanted to know more or was unsure about that he had covered.  Overall great experience, hes a very friendly person and you will come out of his lesson knowing that you have learnt atleast one thing that will improve the way you write or even in a sense how you perceive writing.

Endorsed.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: ninbam1k on December 11, 2010, 01:33:52 am
Hello fellow VNers, I just wanted to raise awareness about this brilliant young tutor(he seemed like 18 to me). Anyways, our session started with language analysis, where he clearly and crisply explained his formulaic way of writing language analysis. Rather than reading straight off his 'legendary' notes (I emphasise this because it's literally a compact bomb of useful information and tips that you will NEED to do exceptionally well in English), he actually engaged in a conversation with me, talking to me about English and how to view it as a subject, a whole. The grace period ended and he nicely asked if I wanted to continue. I agreed and by the end of the session, I was thinking to myself, 'this was the best 100 I ever spent on an english tutor'.

After the sesh with Shinny, my confidence in english boosted from 2, to like 9. I'm well aware of how to approach my year 12 exam now and it's all thanks to this lad. :D

HIGHLY ENDORSED

(YOU CANNOT MISS THIS OPPORTUNITY!)

Btw did someone ask for a Chem tutor? Because you will find no other like Shivesh Varma (Major in being a madcunt)
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Greatness on December 11, 2010, 04:33:43 pm
What more can i say?? Shinny's program is brilliant! He applies extra emphasis on your weaknesses and gives you a thorough explantation of each section of the end of year exam. Some of the stuff he teaches you will be invaluable. His notes are GODLY!! They are reallly goood. You better get in quick before he raises the prices!!!

Endorsed.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Andiio on December 14, 2010, 08:09:49 pm
Shinny's program was really great, the notes are really helpful as well.

Sucks that he didn't do the same context as me :( but he still gave me a plethora of helpful tips and ideas! :D

Endorsed!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Liuy on December 15, 2010, 04:11:34 pm
Endorsed, good stuff Andrew !
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: tea.squaredd on December 15, 2010, 05:33:44 pm
Just had a session with andrew and I have to say, the $100 is definitely worth it.
His explanations about how to approach each section of the subject is easy to understand and his advice on what to do and what to look out for is very handy.
His book, which comes with the session, is VERY well done. His reader-friendly examples on how to structure paragraphs is very useful. Especially to a more maths-orientated person like me.
ENDORSED.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: echenzi on December 16, 2010, 08:09:11 pm
Hey T Towel :) xD


I also went through Shinny's Summer prep today :) I must say, i would be happy paying $150 for this.

He is well prepared and has concise notes and examples on all sections of the VCE Course. His notes come with exercises that you can do later in your spare time as well. They are also colour coded to help you clearly understand the examples he has prepared.

The overall depth achieved in the 3 and a bit hours is also amazing. If you need a kickstart into VCE English, Shinny should really be considered.

Also, his communication skills are excellent and I'm sure he will make a good doctor :)


ENDORSED


Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: ariawuu on December 17, 2010, 11:24:10 pm
BEST 3 HOURS OF ENGLISH OF MY LIFE!
COMMUNICATION+NOTES+KNOWLEDGE+PRICE= BRILLIANT (actually brilliant is an understatement) :)

he had given valuable information i wasn't even aware of and i was happy to say that he is probably the first person to ever help me with expression (which most teachers lack the ability or give the attention to touch on).
BASICALLY HE IS THE BEST OF THE BEST.

thank you shinny for today :)
ENDORSED...... no no its a MUST!




Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: ariawuu on December 17, 2010, 11:35:25 pm
oh i have to add...

people who are thinking of doing summer school tsfx or any other institutions, it is seriously not worth the time or money. you will probably fall asleep in these lectures... SHINNY ALL THE WAY!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: vwinnie8 on December 20, 2010, 12:27:50 pm
Shinny's english course ---

Best $100 spent recently. The notes, which I re-read at home were very detailed and useful, and you can ask shinny anything related to vce during the prep course. a very professional, knowledgeable and friendly guy. 3 hours well spent learning more about VCE Year 12 english - in my opinion, english is the most important vce subject as it MUST be in your top 4. if you are thinking about going to his english course - do not hesitate! you will not regret it, I'm sure I didn't. very very very very good notes.

i bet he knows the vce english course better than some of my.. teachers LOL. some of the stuff my teacher said in year 11 english didn't quite make sense or was not helpful to writing a good essay at all. shinny's english course made everything clear and obvious. soooooo good.

= HIGHLY RECOMMENDED. YOU WILL NOT REGRET THE $100 SPENT.

so yeah guys, sign up before the spots are taken. :)

well done, shinny.  :coolsmiley:

ENDORSED!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: ariawuu on December 20, 2010, 11:51:14 pm
award for excellence in english tutoring of all time goes to.. SHINNY! wooo  XDD im still hyped about your notes lool they will become my bible next year! :)
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Greatness on December 20, 2010, 11:55:06 pm
award for excellence in english tutoring of all time goes to.. SHINNY! wooo  XDD im still hyped about your notes lool they will become my bible next year! :)
+1 these notes are godly!!! srsly this session is definitely worth it
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Ghost! on December 23, 2010, 05:45:49 pm
You won't regret seeing Shinny. Provides you with an excellent set of notes that I'm going to keep close with me for the rest of the year. Just talking to him I swear I could feel my confidence with VCE rising.

The most important thing I took notice over however was his incredible ability to express himself. He communicated every messaged he had perfectly, even though a lot of the concepts and ideas he shares are complex you can really understand everything he has to say, brilliance.

Thanks again for a great session Andrew.

Heavily Endorsed.m
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: echenzi on December 25, 2010, 11:14:00 am
I see it :)

Guys get in soon if you want to get a great headstart on VCE English :)
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: burbs on January 04, 2011, 11:07:52 pm
Just had the session today, endorsed. A great session, he talks exceptionally and explains all sections in a really understandable way.

Oh and the notes are brilliant!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: eeps on January 05, 2011, 11:42:52 pm
I agree with everything that has been said.

Shinny is brilliant. I had my session today. He expresses everything very well - clear and concise. He makes sure you understand everything before moving on. It's well worth the money. He goes above and beyond what any teacher could give - gives valuable advice & tips. The notes are also brilliant. I suggest booking him before spots run out.

Heavily endorsed.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: ariawuu on January 07, 2011, 01:17:37 am
Omgg look who's been busy  ;)

People this guy is the best tutor out in melbourne, leave him a little extra ;D( like i did) he deserves it! comonnn :P


Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: spiffjoin on January 08, 2011, 05:28:01 pm
i know i'm just a lurker on the forum but...
i had the session with shinny yesterday and i can easily say that what i learnt in 3 hours was more valuable than what i've learnt in 5 years of english. he has made a lot of things clear about VCE english that none of my teachers have ever done.
he also gives great examples and explanations and makes sure you understand the material. btw the notes are great too.

so yea, endorsed.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: MrT011 on January 10, 2011, 06:56:40 pm
This guy is great! After a session with him last week, my confidence in english has been raised to a completely new level. The notes I received are also amazing!

endorsed!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Rinjii on January 12, 2011, 12:44:38 pm
Had a lesson with him. Really Awesome, helped heaps!
Endorsed
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: chrisjb on January 12, 2011, 05:20:33 pm
I had a session with him today and learnt so many tips and tricks that were lacking in all my essays thus far and which I'm sure will be a massive help in the future. He's a very cool guy too.

Completely Endorsed.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: liuetenant on January 13, 2011, 08:14:07 pm
HIGHLY ENDORSED (not that he needs it)

the session is absolutely useful, particularly for understanding not on the syllabus of the english course, but also some unique ways to tackle all three components of the course.
totally useful and will definitely give you the push you need to start improving your own work!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: luken93 on January 13, 2011, 09:02:04 pm
Had my session today, and I seriously don't know why English teachers have a job when you have this kid providing more knowledge in 3 hours than I've learnt in my 5 years at high school.

Knows the course inside and out, and knows what it takes to score 10/10s for every section which is all provided in his book!

Highly endorsed!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: slammy on January 14, 2011, 06:33:36 pm
it was my turn today! and it's really really helpful in terms of how to structure your pieces and what to write and what not to write

ENDORSED!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: werdna on January 17, 2011, 07:25:40 pm
Endorsed. I did 10 lessons at James An Coaching College last year, and didn't even learn anywhere near as much stuff as I did in Andrew's session today.

He communicates really well, gives an all-rounded insight on the VCE English course and the notes he provides are awesome!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: reelraw on January 18, 2011, 06:01:56 pm
Had my session today and found it to be very informative, detailed and well structured. Needless to say that you must book a session if you already haven't. The content is conveyed with ease and the resource is extremely useful. Thanks Andrew

Highly endorsed!!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: ruchika5 on January 19, 2011, 04:47:08 pm
Had my session today; Andrew, you're awesome. The notes are brilliant and the way he explains everything has given me a new perspective and confidence towards English. Endorsed
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Tobias Funke on January 22, 2011, 06:07:11 pm
Had my session today, and I just gotta say, if you're having any doubts about VCE English at all, spending the money on this guy won't hurt

Endorsed
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Kaille on January 22, 2011, 06:07:47 pm
Well structured lesson with very detailed notes. Andrew teaches a simple method to writing coherent and succinct essays and context tasks. Left the lesson feeling so motivated to do well in english!!! Best 100 dollars i ever spent :) ENDORSED.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: andyzpipe on January 24, 2011, 06:25:09 pm
Had my lesson today , this guy is sooo good. I mean I've had other english tutors before and this is far the best . I've learnt heaps from todays lesson and will be taking it all aboard. Great explanation on the topics and the writing skills. Thanks man Endorsed
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Christiano on January 26, 2011, 10:41:03 pm
Had my session yesterday, very informative! I feel much more confident in tackling English now with this structured approach. The notes are excellent as well. Keep it up!

ENDORSED
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: vea on January 27, 2011, 08:24:01 pm
I guess it's too late to endorse seeing as how shinny is already booked out (speaks for itself) but my session with him today was the single most useful English session that I have attended, especially for a mathy person like myself. Extremely motivated for English now! :D
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: davidle_10 on January 28, 2011, 03:40:23 pm
Highly recommended. Andrew provides great knowledge and depth in all aspects of VCE English. Highly recommended that you have a session with him as soon as possible because you will not regret this opportunity. ENDORSED
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Summer Prep Course!
Post by: Deadshot on January 29, 2011, 04:54:51 pm
This session was very informative!

I feel much more confident in English now!

The notes are fantastic and will be of great help to me throughout the year.

Way to go

Thank you

:)

ENDORSED
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course!
Post by: Vincezor on April 03, 2011, 08:58:09 pm
Had Andrew come around today for my session.

Highly recommend the course, it's great for the maths-y people like me! The notes he gives you are really good as well!

ENDORSED.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course!
Post by: cltf on April 14, 2011, 09:49:33 pm
Had Andrew today.

He was brilliant! Not to mention the notes and the depth of his knowledge!

HIGHLY ENDORSED.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course!
Post by: edwardtsg on April 16, 2011, 01:39:32 pm
Andrew is a great communicator as he is able to cover a huge range of skills in english, but yet also has brillant teaching styles which ultimately make it clear and concise as possible.

Endorsed.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course!
Post by: stefanb on April 17, 2011, 04:39:46 pm
Had a lesson with Andrew today.
The notes he gave were in-depth and excellent. Covered basically everything you need to know for VCE English, not to mention step-by-step explanations of areas students should focus on and where the most marks are awarded/lost. He's also really easy to get along with and a pleasure to learn from.

Highly endorsed.  :)
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course!
Post by: phill8 on May 23, 2011, 10:04:31 pm
Had Andrew come around today, he was very good explained all of the concepts well and had excellent communication skills.Learnt heaps of stuff that I would've never of learnt with my teacher and he even stayed back a little over time to answer some questions about my other subjects.

Overall highly recommended and endorsed.

Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course!
Post by: chemkid_23 on June 05, 2011, 09:17:24 pm
Had Andrew today. Highly endorsed :) 
Shared a nice latte before we got into it hahaha. He goes over it very thoroughly, at a good speed and always ensures that you're following and understand everything before he moves on to the next concept.
Money was well spent, and as I am now unaware, only use tutors if you really need it; but seeing Andrew covers everything in one hit. Just in time too for my SAC, so now I know what to rectify and incorporate into my writing to achieve better than I would have without his help.
Cheers Andrew.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course!
Post by: aliciaadsv on June 12, 2011, 07:22:25 pm
Loved it for sure !! :D

ENDORSED!!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course - quality tuition by an experienced tutor!
Post by: ๏̯͡๏) on June 18, 2011, 07:11:22 pm
Had my session with Andrew today and it was one of the best tutoring experiences I've ever had.
It was EASILY worth the $120 and I encourage anyone thinking about doing the course to go ahead with it.
Not much left to say apart from amazing and highly endorsed.
Thanks!
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course - quality tuition by an experienced tutor!
Post by: tanw on July 03, 2011, 07:17:49 pm
I had a lesson with Shinny today and I must say this man brings glory to the people of The Middle Kingdom! I will name my first born son after Shinny; I have so much gratitude and respect for this man. I recommend Shinny's course to anyone studying English. He is a cool guy, he explains things really well and the notes he gives out are awesome. You should definitely take his course, it will be the greatest use of $120 that you’ll ever spend (you’d spend more money hiring out an escort for an hour anyway and that won’t improve your marks in English at all). I liked Shinny’s class so much that if we were in prison I'd protect him in the shower. Endorsed.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course - quality tuition by an experienced tutor!
Post by: emsatch on July 07, 2011, 11:04:57 pm
I had a lesson this afternoon with Andrew and, as suggested numerous times before in this forum, he was a great help. In the span of a few hours, Andrew was able to cover the entire English course, pointing out numerous things to watch out for and tips on how to attain top marks from the assessors. These sessions are very comprehensive and will instill a sense of confidence in even the most unsure of students. Heavily endorsed :)
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course - quality tuition by an experienced tutor!
Post by: Camo on July 08, 2011, 11:14:45 pm
Ok, I spent 8 hours of travelling today and what do I have to say? This guy is good. This guy possibly provided me with the understanding of need to get the most out of my English.

Why should you choose him?

-He strips the English study design bare, making it simple and straightforward to understand.
-He provides you with samples of his own work (which I may say I found to be pleasant reading new vocab that he incorporated into his essays).
-He makes you confident in English. (Sorry, this sounds like its achieving the impossible here, I understand some people are good at English, for ages I have not and I hope to find this a turning point).

Therefore..

HIGHLY ENDORSED. :D
Really where else are you going to find someone this good that can take apart the English course bit by bit and provide you with so much understanding and helpful hints you become a pro at English? Really? Don't know. I think you should book a session with Andrew then. :)
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course - quality tuition by an experienced tutor!
Post by: Phenotype on July 11, 2011, 12:06:46 pm
Endorsed. Really helpful and well worth the money; if you're going to get someone to teach you English, get Andrew. Will address the things that teachers neglect.
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course - quality tuition by an experienced tutor!
Post by: Hybird147 on July 12, 2011, 09:12:00 pm
Highly endorsed

Had my lesson today, very useful...
Title: Re: shinny's VCE English Cram Course - quality tuition by an experienced tutor!
Post by: shinny on July 30, 2011, 05:34:45 pm
As you may or may not be aware, ATARnotes.com has moved their advertising section to a new area. To view the latest updates regarding my tuition, along with recent endorsements, click here.