Ah yes I can understand
After all, HSC Task 1 should be around the corner for many schools.
I took a read through the Guidelines you posted, it does truly make me appreciate a community like this. It's genuinely heart warming to see people like you willing to dedicate their time to helping students. I've been active in some forums and it's time to add this to my list
I've reevaluated my essay again, I've taken my teachers feedback into consideration albeit was a bit brief, eg; this could be more concise or you can add more here, so on... So it is greatly appreciated that I can get valuable feedback here.
This *should* be my 15th post so Hooray
I shall aim to be a active member of this forum from now.
Onwards, so my essay so far. I feel that it is a bit waffley in certain areas, I cannot quite transcribe what I want to express into words there. Some quotes might be integrated poorly from what I think. Length is still a bit of a issue (I'm about 40 seconds over time limit atm) so pointing out where I could cut out would be appreciated. I feel like the way I've linked my texts are a bit weak, it probably isn't too late to change quotes so let me know if that is the case.
Thanks again, Wales