No, you've kind of listed things that *could* be the basis of an argument in your definitions, but you haven't gone into any detail about them or given any reasons why they are good or bad. For instance, I could argue that express rights being difficult to change was good, but also that it was bad - just saying they're difficult to change isn't actually a strength or weakness by itself. So, in terms of an evaluation, you're missing an argument/opinion, detail/depth in your points, and why/how they are good/bad.
Unless the task word asks for a definition (eg 'explain the concept of express rights' or similar), you use the definition as part of your answer rather than having it as a chunk sitting by itself. You need to brush up on your task words. I could be totally self-serving here and recommend my textbook or lectures through CPAP... (sorry)
If you have a think about it, what point would mark allocations have if they didn't relate to how long and detailed your answers were supposed to be? Work out how many minutes per mark you get on the exam: that's how many minutes (with a bit of wiggle-room) of HARD writing each question should get. Your 10-marker should be about three pages of solid writing.
All the stuff I listed is from that AOS - you just need to think more broadly about it.
Never. Ever. If you only have two minutes left you write in shitty short sentences and make it look like a paragraph. Using dot points makes you automatically lose half marks.
Yeah, you always need your definitions. Then you add examples to illustrate.
It's more about asking you for an example, or two examples etc. Subjective words such as 'main' are impossible to mark.
Okay. So I've considered your feedback and attempted to reword my answers for the first question so that I have more of an opinion. Does this work better now?
1) Evaluate the means by which the rights of Australians are protected by the Constitution.
There are three means by which the rights of Australians are protected by the Constitution: structural protections, expressed rights and implied rights.
The fact express rights are explicitly outlined in the Constitution and cannot be amended or taken away without a successful referendum ensures the rights of Australians are firmly protected as the parliament of the day cannot simply revoke the rights of constituents as they so desire. However, we have very few express rights (only five in number – s. 51, s. 80, s. 92, s. 116 and s. 117) and those express rights are often limited by nature. An example of this is s. 80, to do with trial by jury; it applies only to indictable Commonwealth offences. There is no such guarantee for indictable State offences. Thus, while express rights can be effective in protecting the rights of Australians, the fact that there are so few and that the ones we do have are so limited in nature means that the express rights outlined in the Constitution are not very effective in the long run in protecting the rights of Australians.
Implied rights are inferred by the High Court and therefore exist only so long as the High Court says they do. The High Court, however, has no obligation to maintain previous rulings in similar cases when presented with a similar case; thus, it is possible they could rule completely to the contrary to their previous rulings. This means that whether or not an implied right exists depends on the interpretation of the High Court and the judges presiding at the time. As a result, the implied rights of Australians could very easily be taken away by the High Court. Thus, while implied rights can broaden what rights Australians have, the fact that they exist only so long as the High Court says it does means that they do not very securely protect the rights of Australians.
Structural protections are mechanisms written into the Constitution. They are not in and of themselves rights but they should ensure the protection of our rights because they protect against an abuse of power. Thus, while they do ensure the protection in rights as they are structures, they do nothing to broaden the base of rights protected in the Constitution.
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I still have no idea how structural protections could protect the rights of Australians though. Can someone please explain?
Side note: In your original answer you referred to "HCA interp" is that High Court Interpretation? And what's "full enforceability"?
Wait... you wrote a Legal studies textbook?