Hey,
I've got my Ancient Trials on Friday, and we haven't done any work in class on how to respond for an essay on Agrippina. Has anyone already done their Personalities essay and have a few tips on what to include/not to?
We only got up to the second major dot point and I don't feel prepared for it.
Thanks! And good luck anyone else for Trials!
Hey!! The questions can only cover the dot points that you have already studied - if they go beyond that, then you have every right to complain, because that'd be grossly unfair. For part A it is a lower order question, eg. describe, outline, explain, etc. Meaning that you don't need to make a judgement, and can sometimes even write in a more narrative form! Part B is analytical, but lucky for you guys the question for Agrippina never changes! It will always be on legacy and interpretations. With that in mind, I always constructed my Agrippina part B responses with a paragraph for each interpretation;
- The evil stepmother
- The sexual deviant
- The hyper-masculine woman commander
- The feminist icon
So I'd have a paragraph on each of these! Note that they all deal with her femininity as well - which is a great thematic through line that you can incorporate. Throughout the response, you assess how and why these interpretations were formed, and how they have contributed to the shaping of her legacy.
As you said you have not reached the final dot point yet, you may not even have to do this! But this is what it almost always is on the HSC exam. I've attached both a Part A and Part B response for Agrippina that I wrote last year which received full marks, if you want to have a look in terms of structure
Susie