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The start of the AFLW season has provoked discussion as to what purpose this form of the game provides. In a measured tone, the article contends that the women's version of the AFL requires time and effort to evolve into a sport from which both players and spectators can reap the benefits of.
From the outset, the article labels the AFL's decision of a "change in game style" as a "quick fix" in the "locker room", positioning readers to view the AFL's suggestions as merely made on a whim and not thought out carefully, and therefore of little use to improving the league. This is further highlighted by suggesting that the "quick fix" would improve the "show" for the "next game", manipulating the audience to believe that the AFL is not looking towards long term prospects for the longevity of the league, and instead simply viewing the league as a "show" which continually needs to be tweaked to provide adequate entertainment for fans.
The article proceeds to draw attention to the possible reasons as to why the AFLW has not necessarily run at its full potential as of yet. These reasons place emphasis on the time and resource constraints placed on teams, therefore indicating that it is not the fault of the players or the league itself, but rather what limited resources it has received. This demonstrates to the reader that the AFLW simply has not been given a chance to develop, positioning them to regard allocating more resources to the league as being necessary for its development. Furthermore, the article elucidates to readers from the outset that the AFLW has only lasted for "minutes", the exaggeration signifying to readers that the league is still in its infancy and is not likely to be perfect from the start. This is elaborated on as the article points out that experience and learning is something that does not occur "overnight", further positing to readers that it is only through being given "patience, trust and time" that the league is able to utilise the experience and learning of players and coaches within a professional league in order to have games of a respectable quality.
Emphasising the notion that "even the men can learn from" this "different and exciting" version of the game, the article indicates to the audience, particularly those who may only regard the men's AFL as being vital, that the AFLW should be an integral part of the sport not just for womens' sake but for men's too, and that the running and perseverance of the league would benefit all parties involved. Additionally, outlining the successes of the women's format of the game "in other sports" compels readers to believe that what has once worked in the past is likely to work again, given that the necessary changes and resources are provided.