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Indo SL - Sample evaluative essay
« on: January 13, 2010, 08:14:33 pm »
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I've attached a sample evaluative essay in PDF format. The topic is on the respective advantages/disadvantages of the Indo and Australian educational system. This should give you some clues as to the layout, structure, and vocab that you will need to employ in the essay portion of the written exam.

I'll be honest: the basic gist of this text was taken from an in-class handout, but I have amended it to a) make the arguments make more sense, and b) include a richer vocabulary and more "handy phrases/idioms." Note that whilst the content is very basic, a variety of linguistic features have been employed. It's this kind of variety in phrasing and grammatical structures that will give you better marks in the exam. I'll be posting a compiled list of such phrases on the board shortly.

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Re: Indo SL - Sample evaluative essay
« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2010, 08:15:03 pm »
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Stickied =]
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Re: Indo SL - Sample evaluative essay
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2010, 08:16:00 pm »
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Holy crap that was fast! Thanks Truetears. Sorry totally mis-saw who that was!
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Re: Indo SL - Sample evaluative essay
« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2010, 08:19:28 pm »
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I am a F5 spammer xD
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Re: Indo SL - Sample evaluative essay
« Reply #4 on: January 13, 2010, 08:20:16 pm »
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Oh me too. In fact my F5 button has developed a sort of indentation on it.
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Re: Indo SL - Sample evaluative essay
« Reply #5 on: January 26, 2010, 12:11:53 pm »
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thankyou!

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Re: Indo SL - Sample evaluative essay
« Reply #6 on: February 28, 2010, 10:12:44 pm »
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Terima kasih banyak!

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Re: Indo SL - Sample evaluative essay
« Reply #7 on: November 16, 2011, 06:50:34 pm »
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can someone PLEASEE link me the essays?? i cant find them! like the link
and my indo exam is next week!
some essays would be very helpful :)