Blondie21:
Rewritten version in much better, always prioritise answering the prompt directly over sounding impressive or cramming in vocab about the text. Thank you to 24bauer12 for your corrections
katiesaliba:
Definitely not necessary, you can score perfectly well with three paras provided they have enough in them. If the forth is of a lesser quality then you're better off strengthening your other arguments rather than stretching yourself to three.
However, it might be worth trying to write 4 for certain prompts because sometimes it's better to have more perspectives instead of longer analysis. Your teacher might be recommending this for another reason though (ie. trying to get you to expand your scope) so maybe give it a go when practicing, but don't feel obliged.
darklight:
My system was to use the word tone 2-3 times per piece (jsut for those lazy assessors who think you aren't mentioning it unless you're using a 'The author employs a ____ tone' format.) The rest is all done through adverbs, ie. 'The author emphatically condemns...' or 'The article vitriolically asserts...'
Don't overdo it though
soNasty:
what, how, why. These words are your new three best friends. At the moment you're fulfilling the 'what' stage of identifying techniques, explaining the effects, and providing evidence (quoting/paraphrasing.) What you need to do is remind yourself to cover the 'how' ie. how the readers/audience are affected, how these responses are elicited; and 'why' ie. why the author has done this for a given contention.
A link to a fuller explanation of this is on the first post, but just being aware of this issue should be enough to combat it. Trial this new approach and see how you go.
Rishi97:
Not compulsory, but recommended (again, for the fussy assessors.) What you don't have to do is discuss contention, tone, or audience of the visual, since usually they're not separate texts, but embedded. Take the 2011 exam for instance, you wouldn't deal with the core article, all four comments, and two visuals in a 'Author, contention, tone, audience' format. You'd just do this for the core text (after a contextualising/background info sentence) then say something like 'This article also prompted several responses from members of the public' or 'There were also two visual aids accompanying this posts of two different types of tattoos.' Keep the intros short and sweet, you don't want to spend too much time on them