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psyxwar

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Writing good conclusions?
« on: September 02, 2013, 09:40:00 pm »
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I guess this is a general thing, not so much an EL exclusive one but anyways:

I'm not too sure how to write a proper conclusion. I was told in my junior HS years to basically just systematically list what you've argued in your essay, but that sounds really bad... what should I aim to include?
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Re: Writing good conclusions?
« Reply #1 on: September 02, 2013, 09:52:23 pm »
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I end up summarising what I've written, and then, if possible, I give a sentence explaining the net result of what I have proven. So for instance, in my last essay about "language is deeply personal and yet through it, we expose our allegiances, desires, beliefs and much more", I concluded by saying that it was precisely the personal nature of language than is able to reveal so much about an individual. Admittedly, for some essays I tend to parrot my intros.
Systematically listing your arguments...not explicitly. You can make mention to them, certainly, but don't provide a list like "firstly, secondly, thirdly" etc. Really, you want to conclude by communicating to the reader that you have said something of substance, of meaning, and that the reader can take something away from your essay.
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Re: Writing good conclusions?
« Reply #2 on: September 03, 2013, 08:24:55 pm »
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Thanks for the help nliu.
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