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vikasarkalgud

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Discovery creative - plz review
« on: November 11, 2017, 11:09:45 pm »
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Attached the second discovery creative I've gone for. Plz help and give hard criticism.

Concerns:
May not be as adaptable as other stories - although I have generalisations  in mind
Only after did I realise some descriptions are stylistically similar to Ode to a Grecian Urn - unintentional
Help me get a motif I haven't properly addressed yet?

Thankyou for any help