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dpate68

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Chem RI
« on: May 21, 2021, 08:00:46 pm »
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Hey could someone please give me some feedback on my chem RI. I wasn't rly sure what to write in the analysis, so if you could give me some guidance on that as well, it would be good. (btw i have already written the whole report)
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maily1234

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Re: Chem RI
« Reply #1 on: May 31, 2021, 03:27:09 pm »
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Hi dpate, would you still like feedback on your chemistry RI?

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Re: Chem RI
« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2021, 12:21:19 pm »
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Hey can someone please give me some feedback

Hey dpate68,

By feedback- do you only need your grammar, sentence structures and paragraphs checked? Or do you also need feedback regarding the facts? Because I don't do chemistry, so I can't really give feedback on the facts given, but I can have a read through and let you know if your research investigation makes sense to me and proof read your work!

Cheers,
Juicebox

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Re: Chem RI
« Reply #3 on: July 03, 2021, 10:16:31 am »
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Hey I can give you feedback if you were after any. I just can't seem to download your work to give you feedback

dpate68

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Re: Chem RI
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2021, 12:47:50 pm »
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Thank you so much.

dpate68

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Re: Chem RI
« Reply #5 on: July 06, 2021, 09:58:48 am »
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Hey so can I have feedback?

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Re: Chem RI
« Reply #6 on: July 06, 2021, 02:42:21 pm »
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Hey,

I've annotated your document with some specific feedback.

With the analysis, try to focus on pulling information out of comparing the results and spend less time restating the results. For example, what does all of them agreeing tell you? You could also compare the differences between results for each species (from the studies) and differences between the results for each species. I'd like to see some integrated discussion of the relative impacts from each section as well at the end.


Make sure you also check your phrasing and writing conventions. Species naming conventions being broken really stands out to me (looks like you might have just been unaware of a couple of things, should be easy to fix).

Please feel free to follow up with any questions or comments :)

Note: I've focused on things to improve to try and help you the most but that doesn't mean there isn't good work in there :)

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Re: Chem RI
« Reply #7 on: July 07, 2021, 10:05:34 am »
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Thank you so much!