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huss1235

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can you look at my pip
« on: October 26, 2017, 02:18:23 pm »
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hi i finished my pip and i was wondering if someone can look at it and roughly tell me what band i will get
if you are willing to look at it quickly please reply so i can post it
thanks

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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #1 on: October 26, 2017, 02:21:35 pm »
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hi i finished my pip and i was wondering if someone can look at it and roughly tell me what band i will get
if you are willing to look at it quickly please reply so i can post it
thanks

Not sure I could 'mark' it and tell you your band, but I'd be happy to look at it :)
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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #2 on: October 26, 2017, 02:28:56 pm »
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hi i finished my pip and i was wondering if someone can look at it and roughly tell me what band i will get
if you are willing to look at it quickly please reply so i can post it
thanks

I can also look over if you want a second opinion :)
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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #3 on: October 26, 2017, 02:29:07 pm »
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Yeah attach it in a post to this thread and we can have a look at it :)
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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #4 on: October 26, 2017, 04:35:17 pm »
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can it get a band 5

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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #5 on: October 26, 2017, 04:39:17 pm »
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That's quite interesting and looks pretty good!  ;D
I couldn't tell you exactly but I'd say maybe Band 5. Might be a little bit lacking in the bibliography for top band criteria but otherwise I think it's a pretty good PIP!

Hope that helps, good job and good luck!  :)
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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #6 on: October 26, 2017, 04:53:55 pm »
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Hey! I definitely think you'd be in the 25-32 range (maybe even more!), so as long as you hit the 50s in your exam I reckon you could get a band 5 :)
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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #7 on: October 26, 2017, 05:22:42 pm »
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Hi thanks so much if it is in the 25-32 range would be be high up there like 31 or 32
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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #8 on: October 26, 2017, 05:28:42 pm »
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Hi thanks so much if it is in the 25-32 range would be be high up there like 31 or 32
Thanks

If I was a marker, I would give you a 30-31 :)
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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #9 on: November 21, 2017, 10:11:54 pm »
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Hi, I just recently started year 12 and my proposal for society and culture is due this week. If possible, can someone please check my proposal, all feedback is welcome and very appreciated. Have a lovely day.
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Re: can you look at my pip
« Reply #10 on: November 23, 2017, 02:25:25 pm »
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yep i will view it now and give you feedback
do youi gave marking guidelines?
EDIT: just went through this you must delve deeper into the questions in order to get high marks i remeber for my proposal each question was 1 page but bigger front i ended up getting 19/20 becuse usally for pip proposals to get a high mark you must maintain depth
i am happy to show you mind but however this must not be plagarised at all
i will provide areas to improve  and feedback on your proposal later tonight
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