Distinctive voices offer a variety of perspectives on the world. Compare how this is achieved in your prescribed text and ONE other related text of your own choosing. One Night The Moon is an Australian musical film based in the 1930s
produced/composed?by highly acclaimed filmmaker Rachel Perkins. The film effectively explores the different perspectives of characters, allowing viewers to connect with each character’s distinctive voice. Perspectives on the world are best conveyed through the distinctive voices as it evokes feelings of the listener.
I think strengthening this introduction would be really beneficial for your essay. The reason being, you have the opportunity here to show your marker what is yet to come in a really positive light, but also, you have the opportunity to flesh out the essay question a bit more. In this circumstance, I'd open up without talking about the text. I'd make the first sentence a direct comment on the essay question. Then, one by one, I'd introduce your prescribed text and your ORT in a sentence each. To finalise, I'd do one last sentence that gives the marker a hint about what you're take on the topic is. Do you wholeheartedly agree with the essay question? Do you have a certain perspective yourself that you can explore? This is your chance to make your essay a stand out by being really unique. My prescribed text One Night the Moon (ONTM) explores the distinctive outlooks of Jim, Albert and Emily through the themes of racism, trust and innocence. My related text is Beds Are Burning by Midnight Oil (written by Peter Garrett), this is a political song with unique voices, which raises the issue of Aboriginal land rights.
The film ONTM presents a dramatic narrative in a musical form and explores distinctive characteristics.
At this point, I suggest you flesh out exactly what the perspectives in the text are (as the essay question requires) so that as you mention each part of the textual evidence below, you can link it to these perspectives to create a really strong, coherent essay.Whilst examining the relationships between the aboriginals and white settlers, the themes of racism and trust are evident.
The use of dialogue creates the distinct personality of Jim, which is apparent through phrases such as; “No blacks on my land.”, representing the racism that occurred within the 1930s which highly influenced Australian society.
To throw a technique in here, you can say that he uses high modality. Jim is certain about this. Naming the technique will strengthen the analysis.Jim feels extremely threatened by Albert’s connection with the land and as a result, continually discriminates against all “blacks”. A motif which is repeatedly presented by director Rachael Perkins, within the film, ONTM, and was common in a 1930’s Australian context.
Excellent about the motif, great job!One Night the Moon explores diverse perspectives and challenging concepts of what land and place might mean to an individual. Discrimination is explored through the unique perspectives of a white settler, Jim, and an Aboriginal, Albert. The duet between the “black” tracker and settler, “This Land is Mine”, articulates lyrically the clashing beliefs held by the “black” tracker and the settler in regards to their diverse views of land ownership. Jim, the settler, expresses his strong perspective of a defined, capitalist ownership over the land with the use of the metaphor, “all the way to the old fence line” and sings, demandingly and desperately using truncated sentences, continually repeating, “this land is mine”. Albert employs the use of personification
great!!! through the line If you can avoid saying "the quote" or "the line" then you should. It just makes it flow a bit better. So, you can replace it with "personification when he says..."“this land is me/rock, water, animal, tree”, which demonstrates his connection with the land. The repetition of Jim, insisting that he can “see” all the way “to the old fence line”, his strict beliefs are evident to the audience. Jim discovers the “black” tracker and the white police officer’s perspectives, that there is a difference between seeing the land and reading the land. Jim might be able to see the length of his land ownership, but he cannot read the land for the signs of his daughter’s wanderings. Thus the various functions and types of voices are displayed through the themes of racism, trust and, authority within OMTM, whilst portraying the horrid experience of losing a daughter.
You're implicitly dealing with the question here. Which is good that you are dealing with it, but to elevate your work you want to be explicitly referencing the question. It asks you for perspectives, so make sure that you open and close with that in each paragraph. You've put it in the middle, which is great! We just need to extend it more to create that flow of coherency Perkin’s uses a unique perspective of a child, to linguistically express her ideas. Viewers are able to interpret an interesting voice and explore the different perspectives of a child’s point of view.
Awesome! Great introduction of text whilst combining it with the Childhood innocence and trust is very much visible in Emily, as she is still young enough to believe in non-existent things, such as being able to chase the moon. Her costume helps to represent her innocence. In the film she wears a white dress whilst running towards the moon, symbolizing her purity, which is also the same colour as the moon, foreshadowing her disappearance. Additionally, Emily is unaware of the real world and the harsh racial realities of whites not accepting “blacks”. This is expressed through body language as she happily waves to Albert’s family, as she passes above them in a high horse and cart. Jim’s family being above the “blacks” demonstrates the perceived authority of whites over blacks. Emily’s oblivious nature allows viewers to interpret the family’s relationships from the language used. Perkins encourages viewers to understand that language affects interpretation and shapes meaning by allowing them to bond with and appreciate Emily’s understanding of the world, through childish acts.
This is definitely a really solid paragraph. It's really well written! Again, a more obvious attack on the question would strengthen it. However, this one stands alone well!My related text, the song “Beds are Burning”, by Midnight Oil, lyrically explores the ways in which voice is created and interpreted, and the need for equality between the white people and Aboriginals. The first verse is setting the visual scene for the song, that being 1930’s Australia. In the second verse a variation of interesting views is explored through the inequality in Australia. The sentences are truncated,
(yes I love a good truncated sentence!)and to the point, such as: “The time has come”, representing that action is required instantly. “To say fair’s fair”, is to admit that the displacement of Australian aboriginals is unfair. “To pay the rent” means Australian society needs to accept the fact that Australian Aboriginals are the original owners of this land, and their rights are being disrespected. The repetition of verses is a common technique within the song. Garrett repeats verses often in this song, as he is trying to communicate different voices in a simple way to the audience. We encounter a range of views about the racial and class bias that exists in Australia, through the lyrics and language in “Beds Are Burning”, thus leading to a deeper understanding of the causes of conflict within Australian society.
Your analysis is really deep here, excellent work!Perkin’s use of distinctive characteristics allows viewers to interpret meanings shaped through distinctive voices. When comparing One Night the Moon and Beds Are Burning it is visible that both create a strong sense of setting and reflect on the landscapes and harsh realities which surround the characters, through each voice.
Amazing! Perkins and Garrett both depict voices whose traumatic experiences in the world, inspire sympathy and whilst their perspectives remain both distinctive and powerful. Perkins uses several voices within the film, creating more depth in comparison to Beds Are Burning which is from one person’s perspective, however both texts continue to demonstrate an understanding of the conflicted society of 1930 Australia.