heyy miss shep, we have got the same topic for ours, what you are arguing is pretty strong but this is the take I took for my main ideas: (this is my introduction and main ideas)
The state, an international entity: established on the blood and sweat of civilians and alike over thousands of years of political and cultural revolution. The status of the state has culminated and evolved into importance from the infant days of Sumer and Elam in 2700BC to the very hot Cold War post-WWII. But today, in the 21st century, are we experiencing the fall of the state? Or have we already experienced it. As the world becomes more interconnected with globalisation fast fuelling the thriving (arguable ailing) global economy and satisfying the thirst for growth, the role of the state possesses a newly formed ambiguity about its global political influence. The state has begun to lose influence and power in the global political sphere as other non-state actors such as Institutions of Global Governance, Non-governmental organisations and Transnational Corporations devour the vulnerability of the state. And an extremist may say that this could lead to a future in which the role of the state is somewhat passive and actions are dictated by international bodies. The thought does not stray far from any intellect.