Hey, everyone!
I just received my Trials results for Extension 1 English and am pretty happy with them. My creative is only just getting into the A range so I would like to boost it up before HSC. One comment I keep getting on it is clarifying on the time frame to show context more clearly. The story is set in 1974 Japan and I use Japanese words, places and events to shape it but I was wondering if I needed to specify the year itself and how I could do it subtly. So far, I placed the setting by referencing the Japanese oil crisis in 1973 being over, mentioning the Sumitomo high rise building which was finished in 1974 and quoting lyrics from one of the number one hit songs in 1974. I think it's because I've done the research that it seems explicit and so it might not actually be to the marker. Should I try to insert the year in and how should I do it?
Hey! With context I did kinda what you did - subtle references. Mine was written in letters, so I did have specific dates at the beginning of my letters which helped ground it in a specific time period. Other than that, my story was set in the background of the slave trade and referenced contextual events. For instance:
Lord Grenville passionately plead for the end of the injustice, arguing the trade to be contrary to the principles of righteousness, humanity and sound policy. Fortunately, the House of Commons passed the Abolition of the Slave Trade Bill by 114 votes to 15 on the 25th of March.
Also I referenced some of the philosophers of the period as my module was ways of thinking. This was also a nice way to add in context but it wasn't obvious or anything to the reader.
Hope that somewhat helped