hey...
i know i wasn't the one that asked the question, but i have issues in regard to legal essays structure as well!!
thats awesome advice, thanks jamon!!!
what do you think about the point, evidence, explain, link structure for legal?! thats what we've been taught to do but i'm not 100% sure!?
thanks again
~BK~
PEEL works really well for Legal - Though I think sometimes your point and link will end up very much intertwined. Like, your point might be, "Courts do a shit job at achieving justice," but that in itself could be linking to the question. Or, you might need to go one extra to make the link, "Thus showing how the criminal justice system fails to achieve equality." Point was about courts, link was to a larger idea. So it totally depends I think.
I'd also personally replace the
EXPLAIN part of PEEL with
EVALUATE, since that is more commonly what you'll be doing.
But yep, PEEL works really well! A great way to make sure you are continually answering the question