Hey, Elyse!
Thank you for the feedback! Could I ask how I could show representation more explicitly? I was also recommended this by my tutor but am still a bit confused in how I should approach it.
Angelina
Hey Angewina! Sure thing. Take the advice with a grain of salt because I've only seen this one paragraph of yours! But, think of it like this:
Through the very fact that someone has written something, they have literarily represented something that actually exists (or could exist). Nothing can be "real" in writing - it is just writing. So everything that is written is a written representation of a real concept, event, imagined notion, or scenario.
So put super simply: anything that has ever been written, sung, filmed, is a simulation of a reality or imagined reality. It is a representation. So, automatically, authors represent things through the fact that they have written. You haven't hugely got to change anything you've written, because everything you've written so far does address the fact that authors write with purpose, so it becomes about bringing the word "representation" to the forefront of your analysis in order to show your marker that you truly understand the author's intentions to represent something in a literary manner. You haven't got to change this drastically, just bring representation out to play a bit more.
Does this make sense?