Hi, I'm stuck on how to practise my essay writing and how to structure it. Is there any free resources that will help improve my writing other than tutors? And if not do I just have to keep practising at home? Because I am currently practising at home but I don't know how to fix my mistakes so can someone please help!
- If you want your work marked, you can post it here:
https://atarnotes.com/forum/index.php?topic=175327.0. Forum members are more than happy to help so don't be afraid to ask for assistance!
- You could also check out these threads for topics, and other people's work and corrections to get an idea of what you should include in your pieces:
https://atarnotes.com/forum/index.php?topic=172971.0 https://atarnotes.com/forum/index.php?topic=171453.0[/url [url=https://atarnotes.com/forum/index.php?topic=171227.0]https://atarnotes.com/forum/index.php?topic=171227.0 https://atarnotes.com/forum/index.php?topic=160659.0And more specific advice...
Creative
- Don't begin with an introduction. You don't have time for one, and starting smack-bang in the problem/climax/whatever you want to call it is way more interesting and it gives you the most opportunity to show off your creative writing abilities.
- Conclusions aren't necessary. Just don't make the ending too abrupt.
- Show don't tell. I know, cliched advice but don't, for example, say the character is tired. Describe how their clothes are soaking with sweat and breathing is laboured and heavy.
- Plot doesn't matter that much. Just don't make it super boring or cliched though (e.g "it was all a dream....", "and suddenly, X character who died/Jesus/some god-like figure appeared and saved the day!")
- Your focus (and what the markers are looking for) is to get whatever you're imagining in your head, into your reader's head. This is your main goal and everything should be catered towards achieving this.
- Practice, practice, practice. And get feedback, this is the most important part. There's no point to being able to write an essay in 15 minutes if it's crap.
- Not necessary, but sophisticated vocabulary is nice. It just gives you more cards to play and show off. Warning though, don't just look up a word in a thesaurus and plonk it in; you have to know how to use the word in proper contexts. Best way to improve vocab is to read.
Persuasive
- Flesh out your arguments. Don't just have 1 piece of evidence and explanation for each. Argue it from multiple view points.
- Use techniques that are appropriate to your argument.
- Don't overuse rhetorical techniques, especially rhetorical questions and inclusive language.
- Appeals (e.g appeals to financial interests, authority) are the best because 1) they're effective 2) harder to weave in (which if successful, makes you look better).
- If you're running out of time, just have 1 introduction, 2 substantial body paragraphs and a conclusion.
- In your intro, just state the context and contention then move on. It doesn't need anything else and you can't afford to waste time.