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GAMSAT Section 2 Essay Corrections
« on: March 02, 2016, 04:42:14 pm »
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Hey guys :)

Just thought I'd make this thread here for submitting essays for section 2. I want to add mine and anyone who would like to add theirs for correction feel free to!

Good luck & thanks !

PS: this is my first timed essay! I know it's late but I've been reading up on topics/compiling ideas for a while, just haven't done timed yet. This was done in 28 mins in total of planning + writing. SO it may be a little rusty/not good, but the following prompts are for this piece:

* Anybody who is any good is different from anybody else - Felis Frankfurter

* People are always talking about originality, but what does this mean? As soon as we are born, the world begins to work on us, and this goes on to the end - Goethe

* They will say you are on the wrong road, if it is your own - Antonio Porchia

* Conformity is the jailer of freedom and the enemy of youth - John F Kennedy

* We are half ruined by conformity, but we should be wholly ruined without it - Charles Dudley Warner
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