Hey that was an awesoooome idea Jamon!
thnx.. I just changed the unwanted/wanted idea to suit my texts. See what you think... hopefully it works
The only thing i'm worried about is Paragraph Three - do you know 'The Door' poem by Miroslav Holub? I don't think it really fits the idea of that paragraph... unless u think so? I could find another related text of otherwise just scrap that para and add more to the others?
Thesis/Intro:Discoveries can offer an individual fresh insights and ideas which enable speculation about future possibilities. However, the significance of a discovery, whether deliberate or by chance, is relative to the measure in which it affects meaningful change in one's perception of themselves and their life. Robert Frost’s poems, ‘Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening’ and ‘The Tuft of Flowers’, support these ideas through the exploration of both planned and unexpected discoveries. The short story ‘Marigolds’ by Eugenia Collier, and ‘The Door’, a poem written by Miroslav Holub, also successfully portray the different natures of discovery and their effects. All four texts utilize effective language devices to present to the reader a greater picture of how vital a discovery is in leading to a new understanding of an individual and their world, regardless of how it is instigated.
Paragraph One – Planned Discovery with unpredicted results – Stopping by WTopic Sentence: Pre-planned discoveries can often lead to unforeseen realisations which consequently challenge one’s previous beliefs and hence shape one’s perceptions.
Paragraph Two – Unplanned discovery with unpredicted results - MarigoldsTopic Sentence: Similarly, unanticipated discoveries may also result in a sudden and unexpected transformation of an individual’s views.
Paragraph Three – Planned discovery with predicted results – The DoorTopic Sentence: On the contrary, a premeditated discovery can bring about formally anticipated results which embrace renewed awareness.
Paragraph Four – Unplanned discovery with wanted/predicted results – Tuft of FlowersTopic Sentence: Correspondingly, unexpected discoveries may lead to previously sought after results involving fresh and needed perceptions of an individual and their world.
Conclusion:A discovery must represent a catalyst for change in the perception of an individual and their world for it to render any significance in their life. Frost’s poems ‘Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening’ and ‘The Tuft of Flowers’, along with Holub’s ‘The Door’ and Collier’s short story ‘Marigolds’, successfully support this interpretation of discovery through the employment of several engaging language techniques. It is evident that irrespective of its nature, planned or unexpected, the effect on changing one’s perception of themselves and their world is the most significant aspect of discovery.
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