hey guys, english is coming up and ive got a super duper timed piece i just did (mostly to improve my wrist strength) and was wondering the mark range i could get [sorta like a worst case scenario, pretty rushed, just in case i run out of time on the real thing]
thank you - took 31 mins to write and then typed quickly. thanks guys !
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"Eddie Mabo is a strong, but flawed character"
Rachel Perkins documents the life of Eddie “Koiki” Mabo from his time on Murray through his Union years and his long legal battle for land rights. Eddie was a man with many odds against him; history, society, the government, and even other Indigneous people. Yet, he overcame all of these odds to fight for his rights and the rights of all Indigenous people. Perkins presents Eddie as an ordinary human who had his flaws as well as his strengths. Too preocuppied at times, Eddie did not always give the time that he should have spent with his family. With the support of his legal team and with the love and support of his wife, Bonita, Eddie was able to change history with the landmark Native Title Act.
Eddie’s heavy involvement in the union, recruiting workers and later setting up the school for Indigenous children shows him as a man who believed in respect for the traditional ways of life as we see in the scene on Murray as Benny talks of the importance of tradition. Indigenous people at this time did not have many rights. The law of Terra Nullius meant that the Indigenous were not seen as the original settlers of Australia and suffered the hands of the British. Laws that discriminated against the Aborigines were observed in every day life. For instance, at the pub, Eddie was not served like the other non-Indigenous patrons, the bartender blamed “the law.” Queensland premier Bjelke Petersen then enacted a law that wiped out Indigenous claim after while settlement. Eddie was man who knew that these kind of injustices could no longer be tolerated. At a time when Indigenous people were still being treated like second-class citizens, Eddie stands up for his people and the rights they deserve as the early settlers of Australia. Perkins portrays him as a man who was had the courage to claim his rights and rights for all Indigenous people.
Eddie can be seen as a remarkable man in the sense that his claim for land rights branched beyond his own. His fight in the Supreme Court is far from smooth sailing. Perkins effectively portrays his perseverance and headstrong personality. Eddie does not give up, “We can’t lose.” Even when his case runs out of money and results in him applying twice for legal aid, giving up is not an option. Eddie loses his fight in the Supreme Court but his loss does not stop him. Perkins demonstrates his courage in the scene that depicts Eddie standing tall and conveying ‘I will not give up. He continues to fight in the High Court even though he has lost his land claim case in the Supreme Court. This means his fight is no longer just for himself, but for all Indigneous people squashing the argument that he was power-hungry and desired self-gratification. Perkins demonstrates that Eddie was instrumental in making race relations better for his people.
It is evident that through any battle and hardships, stress and anxiety are inevitable. Perkins conveys this through Eddie’s difficult moments in the docudrama. Although his fight is for a good cause, he has an opposite effect in regards to his family life. He may be seen as “the one” who will make history outside of his home but to his wife Netta, he is man who at times neglects his family’s welfare, too focused on the bigger picture. In an intense and passinate argument, Eddie lashes out at Netta and their disagreement almost results in dometic violence. Eddie blames Netta for “not listening to [him],” yet Netta has been by his side through it all. Perhaps in conflict with Netta, he was not always aware that he missed so much of his family life and only realises this at the end when his health begins to truly deteriorate. Perkins aims to convey that this kind of realisation is universal, that often times we do not realise something until it is gone. However his realisation and apology to Netta shows that he did have compassion and understanding and that he was human; “I’m sorry I didn’t help you more.” Perkins presents Eddie as an ordinary man who made sacrifices in terms of his family and his own health to bring justice to all Indigenous people.
Overall, Perkins’ potrayal of Eddie is a display of how one ordinary man can change the odds and “make history.” Eddie is determined in fighting for his rights and the rights of his people. His courage is strong and unbroken and through the hardships of a legal battle.