Hi everyone,
I know this sounds petty, but I am having trouble writing a meaningful conclusion at the end of my answers. They are often too generic and my teacher says that I will lose marks over this.
I am finding it difficult to make it meaningful without introducing any new points.
Any advice would be greatly appreciated!
In Legal Studies you need to
have a conclusion, you don't need to
write a conclusion per se. Basically, you get marked on quality+quantity of points, combined with relevance/responsiveness to the question. As long as you make your answer relevant and responsive to the question, you don't need a 'conclusion' the way you do in English. If anything, having a conclusion takes away from time to make more points or more detailed points. The Assessor's Report only cautions that students need to come to a conclusion that is specific to the question, and not generic (says nothing except repeats the question) or rote-learned (sounds like it's responding to another question).
A better way is to have a clear argument from the start, and then to write your entire piece in a way that flows with that argument/response. You can still have both sides - but you phrase counterarguments as things you rebut, or as 'even though' concessions. This makes the whole response more thoughtful, and stops it being a pre-memorised list of generic points.
And think about it: if you use points from your answer in your conclusion, you're just repeating yourself. And you're only getting credit for those points once.
(If you get to the end of your answer and are concerned you haven't made your response/argument 100% clear, by all means of course have one short, clear, direct sentence saying what it is
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