It's an email to my friend Kazumi persuading her to stay in Australia because she wants to go back to Japan (2008 exam)
That's... not what I was expecting. VCE is not real-life, so see what jibba says because he has VCE experience.
General format for emails:
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Email Subject Line (Make sure you fill this out)
Recipient + Honorific (先生、様)
State your Affiliation. (モナシュ大学のホタルです。)
Opening Greeting (いつもお世話になっております。)
Introduce the Topic of your Email (来週の発表について、お願いがあります。)
Elaborate and Explain your Topic (this is the essence of your email).
Closing Greeting (では、よろしくお願い致します。)
Sender Name (ホタル イーネ)
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