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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1155 on: June 01, 2018, 04:30:36 pm »
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Thank you soo much for the advice henrychapman and fantasticbeasts.

By any chance would you mind reading my updated introduction:

‘To be significant, an individual must contribute to change.’

To what extent does this statement apply to the personality you have studied?
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To a great extent, contribution to change is an essential element in being historically significant. When applied to Albert Speer it is evident that this statement is true as Speer not only had an impact upon his immediate Nazi context and the course of the war, but also the societal understanding of his own character and the Nazi legacy itself. Throughout this presentation it will be argued that Speer’s impact was not limited to the Nazi movement and the second world war, rather his contribution to change extends to the progression of the ripple effects of these events and the writing of history itself in relation to the following; prolonging the war by 2 years, his confession of his acknowledgement of the atrocities of the Reich at the Nuremberg Trials and writing ‘Inside The Third Reich.’ Ultimately, it is starkly clear that for an individual to be considered momentous, they must commit to change.
I like this intro, i can see how you've implemented the feedback and its nicey done!
Within it, i see alot of what i would say myself!
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So with this first paragraph, i agree with fb3 about too much context. Makers probably know a lot of what Speer did as armaments minister, so for this question you don't need to go into lots of detail like you have. It sounds like a Part A question answer, which isn't necessarily bad, but you're trying to do a part B, so you need to focus more on the question and less on the events themselves.

Which is why i believe your second idea is a lot better. It condenses most of what you said in your first idea more concisely.
As Minister of Armaments in World War Two from 1942 onwards, Speer reformed the armaments industry to maximise production efficiency. Speer stated of his own contribution through his position as Minister of Armaments, “I prolonged that war by many months.” Although the architect had very limited knowledge of the industry, he had expert organisational skills. In the first six months of Speer’s appointment in this position, production of guns increased by 27%, ammunition production increased by 97% and tank production increased by 25%. Between 1942 and 1944, labour productivity per worker increased by over 100%.
So up to this point, its really good, you've talked about how Speer has made a contribution to the war effort. I like how you've supported it with some statistics. At the same time, this part sounds more like evidence. I believe you're missing a sentence or two stating your point that his role as minister for armaments was a way he contributed to change. This stuff makes good evidence!

From then on, i feel as if you went on a bit of a tangent. I did Speer as my study and while all of what you said did happen, its not really answering the question that much. So i think you should condense it a little in a way that still shows you know your content without deviating from the question too much.
Hence, Speer made a significant contribution to the war effort through his role as Minister of Armaments.

I see you've tried to make an effort to tie it to the question here; but after your tangent and given how small it is, it seems a bit forced. Like you've waffled in an exam and then with 30 seconds left you desperately try to tie it all together. Which is why i think the tangent needs to be reduced to bring it back on track, while expanding this point to ensure you're correctly answering the question.

Hope this helps!  ;D
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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1156 on: June 01, 2018, 05:42:59 pm »
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Thank you soo much Mazda438 for the advice!!!! Honestly means a lot

What I have done is I have attempted to improve and rewrite a paragraph on Speer prolonging the war. If you wouldn't mind, could you please have a read of it?

It is through Speer’s position as the Minister of Armaments that provided him with the ability to make changes which he is remembered for to this day. With Germany being faced with a long-lasting two-front war with the Soviets and the United States, Germany had to significantly increase its armaments production to cope. It was under Speer’s authority as the Minister of Armaments in World War Two, he significantly increased Germany's ability to fight back against the Allies in the war by reforming the armaments industry to maximise production efficiency. Speer stated of his own contribution through his position as Minister of Armaments, “I prolonged that war by many months.” Although the architect had very limited knowledge of the industry, he had expert organisational skills. In fact, in the first six months of Speer’s appointment in this position, production of guns increased by 27% and ammunition production increased by 97%, which ultimately reveals the immense impact he had on the war effort. Moreover, through Speer’s implementation of a system of specialisation in the production of all resources, he thereby as Sereny suggested: “was single-handedly responsible for the improvement of the economy.” Hence, it is speculated that his reorganisation of the economy was so effective that Speer actually extended the Nazi’s ability to fight in the Second World War by up to two years and is ultimately the reason why Speer is still significant to this day.

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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1157 on: June 01, 2018, 06:04:38 pm »
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Thank you soo much Mazda438 for the advice!!!! Honestly means a lot

What I have done is I have attempted to improve and rewrite a paragraph on Speer prolonging the war. If you wouldn't mind, could you please have a read of it?

It is through Speer’s position as the Minister of Armaments that provided him with the ability to make changes which he is remembered for to this day. With Germany being faced with a long-lasting two-front war with the Soviets and the United States, Germany had to significantly increase its armaments production to cope. It was under Speer’s authority as the Minister of Armaments in World War Two, he significantly increased Germany's ability to fight back against the Allies in the war by reforming the armaments industry to maximise production efficiency. Speer stated of his own contribution through his position as Minister of Armaments, “I prolonged that war by many months.” Although the architect had very limited knowledge of the industry, he had expert organisational skills. In fact, in the first six months of Speer’s appointment in this position, production of guns increased by 27% and ammunition production increased by 97%, which ultimately reveals the immense impact he had on the war effort. Moreover, through Speer’s implementation of a system of specialisation in the production of all resources, he thereby as Sereny suggested: “was single-handedly responsible for the improvement of the economy.” Hence, it is speculated that his reorganisation of the economy was so effective that Speer actually extended the Nazi’s ability to fight in the Second World War by up to two years and is ultimately the reason why Speer is still significant to this day.
That's really starting to come together!
One thing though:
It is through Speer’s position as the Minister of Armaments that provided him with the ability to make changes which he is remembered for to this day...and is ultimately the reason why Speer is still significant to this day.

to me, this statement is an absolute, like you believe this is the biggest reason why speer is significant. I would take this a little further and perhaps argue this was why he was significant on a large level, but his actions at the Nuremberg trials were what really made him significant on a global scale.
The way it sounds make it seem like it the only reason when its not not, so perhaps rewording it would help?
For example something like "one of the largest reasons why Speer is significant is the way he contributed to the change of the outcome of ww2"
and then link the end of the paragraph into the next one and start it with "although on a national scale, his contributions as armaments minister made him significant, it was his actions at the Nuremberg trials which ultimately led to Speer becoming such a prominent figure in history"

Don't actually use them, they're not very good but they generally capture the point I'm trying to make.
However, it is still pretty good so if you want to keep it like that then go for it.

All in all, good job!
Now its time to consturct the rest of your paragraphs!
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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1158 on: June 01, 2018, 06:36:38 pm »
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That's really starting to come together!

Now its time to consturct the rest of your paragraphs!


I'm a bit lost for words/ideas for my second paragraph. This is what I have done so far:

PARAGRAPH #2: NUREMBERG TRIALS

Although on a national scale, his contributions as Armaments Minister made him a prominent figure, it was his actions at the Nuremberg trials which ultimately led to Speer becoming such a significant figure in history. Speer’s confession of his acknowledgement of the atrocities of the Reich at the Nuremberg Trials ultimately changed the perceptions made about all Nazis by displaying empathetic thought and acknowledgement. Essentially, by Speer admitting to this, he fundamentally changed the generalisations, that all Nazis were inherently evil.

By the way, thank you for the paragraph starter it really help me with tieing in my speech/arguments.

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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1159 on: June 01, 2018, 08:51:50 pm »
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I'm a bit lost for words/ideas for my second paragraph. This is what I have done so far:

PARAGRAPH #2: NUREMBERG TRIALS

Although on a national scale, his contributions as Armaments Minister made him a prominent figure, it was his actions at the Nuremberg trials which ultimately led to Speer becoming such a significant figure in history. Speer’s confession of his acknowledgement of the atrocities of the Reich at the Nuremberg Trials ultimately changed the perceptions made about all Nazis by displaying empathetic thought and acknowledgement. Essentially, by Speer admitting to this, he fundamentally changed the generalisations, that all Nazis were inherently evil.

By the way, thank you for the paragraph starter it really help me with tieing in my speech/arguments.
No worries!
Hmmmmmm. I would talk about some of the differing historians opinions and link that to why he is significant.
He may be dead, but there is still historical debates about him, he lives on.
He is significant because people still talk about him.

Thats what i think should be included not 100% sure if its right thoigh  :)
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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1160 on: June 01, 2018, 09:17:30 pm »
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No worries!
Hmmmmmm. I would talk about some of the differing historians opinions and link that to why he is significant.
He may be dead, but there is still historical debates about him, he lives on.
He is significant because people still talk about him.

Thats what i think should be included not 100% sure if its right thoigh  :)

That's a valid point. :-)


I'm a bit lost for words/ideas for my second paragraph. This is what I have done so far:

PARAGRAPH #2: NUREMBERG TRIALS

Although on a national scale, his contributions as Armaments Minister made him a prominent figure, it was his actions at the Nuremberg trials which ultimately led to Speer becoming such a significant figure in history. Speer’s confession of his acknowledgement of the atrocities of the Reich at the Nuremberg Trials ultimately changed the perceptions made about all Nazis by displaying empathetic thought and acknowledgement. Essentially, by Speer admitting to this, he fundamentally changed the generalisations, that all Nazis were inherently evil.

By the way, thank you for the paragraph starter it really help me with tieing in my speech/arguments.


I think the last sentence you've written is a bit redundant bc you're basically saying what you wrote in the previous sentence again. Instead of this, you could introduce a historian quote - this will lead to further discussion on Speer's significance because you have more to go off. Also, the way you've used the word "ultimately" implies you're 100% sure that whatever event happened was totally the only reason Speer became significant. Idk if it's just me but I got that vibe lol.
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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1161 on: June 01, 2018, 10:00:27 pm »
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That's a valid point. :-)

I think the last sentence you've written is a bit redundant bc you're basically saying what you wrote in the previous sentence again. Instead of this, you could introduce a historian quote - this will lead to further discussion on Speer's significance because you have more to go off. Also, the way you've used the word "ultimately" implies you're 100% sure that whatever event happened was totally the only reason Speer became significant. Idk if it's just me but I got that vibe lol.

Firstly, 100% see what you mean. What I did was I merged the two sentences into 1 so it doesn't sound repeating. Thank you for pointing that out.

Also, you know how if I make 30 posts I can get an essay marked by a moderator. How do I do this? Where do I post my essay (It's a 10marker on Albert Speer)?

Thanks in advance


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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1162 on: June 02, 2018, 12:23:07 am »
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I'm a bit lost for words/ideas for my second paragraph. This is what I have done so far:

PARAGRAPH #2: NUREMBERG TRIALS

Although on a national scale, his contributions as Armaments Minister made him a prominent figure, it was his actions at the Nuremberg trials which ultimately led to Speer becoming such a significant figure in history. Speer’s confession of his acknowledgement of the atrocities of the Reich at the Nuremberg Trials ultimately changed the perceptions made about all Nazis by displaying empathetic thought and acknowledgement. Essentially, by Speer admitting to this, he fundamentally changed the generalisations, that all Nazis were inherently evil.

By the way, thank you for the paragraph starter it really help me with tieing in my speech/arguments.

Had a hectic week (pretty much every week now at uni) but anyway I want to add that I would slightly alter what you are arguing here. Speer presenting the facade of the 'Good Nazi' was not important in that it changed perceptions of all the Nazis. Rather, what you need to emphasise here is that Speer separated himself from the other Nazis through his remorse and empathy and this is what made him ultimately significant - the fact that he stood out. That is what you really should be focusing on and this directly links to the question as if Speer had not changed the public perception of him (through his remorseful attitude), he would have simply blended in with all the other Nazis who all instead swore an oath to protect Hitler's name in the trials.

Also, I am interested - are you bringing into this some ways in which change isn't necessary? Because you can never argue that Speer's significance was 100% due to changes he made. Think about his work in architecture - he was such a significant figure within the Nazi regime because his architectural work was based off pre-existing ideas of dominance and permanency. He adopted (did not change) Nazi values and instead used the existing ones to form the basis of his architectural masterpieces. By doing so, Hitler was impressed by his work and this allowed him to progress further in prominence within the regime, therefore making him more significant without contributing to change (in its ideology).
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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1163 on: June 02, 2018, 01:47:52 pm »
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Hey ;D Its prob a bit late...but was just wondering if anyone would be interested in having a quick look at my 'speech' response to the trial question,
'History is the record of an encounter between character and circumstance.'
Evaluate this statement in relation to the personality you have studied.
I do Albert Speer- the presentation is due on Monday so if anyone has any time I would really appreciate it! ;D
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It is not common for individuals to be truly selfless. Nor is it common for them to expose their own flaws. Albert Speer, a human, yet a Nazi, was no exception. HE embodies the hurdle between character and circumstances that ALL individuals face. However, unlike others: HE took every opportunity as this character, HE took every opportunity to manipulate HIS circumstances and HE took every opportunity to invest in HIMSELF.

Albert Speer was a self-invested opportunist. HE possessed the ability to craft his own history and mould his opportunistic character to any circumstance- whether it be as an architect, an armaments minister or as a guilty defendant. However, further insight has been gained through contentious historiography, affirming the statement, ‘history IS the record of an encounter between character and circumstances’.

Evolving historical records have revealed that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to enrich his circumstance as the FIRST ARCHITECT of the Third Reich. (1934) Speer was recognised by the Nazi elite through his efficient redecoration of Nazi headquarters. It was these circumstantial encounters that Speer manipulated to impress elite Nazi officials… and HITLER. In his initial year as First Architect, Speer captivated the Nazis at the 1934 Nuremberg Rallies, through the renowned ‘Cathedral of Lights’. Consequently, as an admirable technocratic, Speer assumed control of the Germania Project in 1939. Controversially, Speer was directly subordinate to Hitler alone in this project which Fest documents as, “a kind of dictatorial status” . This account certifies that Speer was involved in the reallocation of 23,000 Jewish apartments.  Yet, it is still debated; Was Speer responsible for the deportation of Berlin Jews in 1941? Sereny sides with Speer’s historical art, “the early resettlement work…was purely administrative and it is unlikely that Speer himself knew much about the details involved.”  Yet, Sereny’s record has neglected to explore beyond Speer and is contradicted by Van der Vat’s evidence from a removed part of the Wolter Chronicles, “in accordance with Speer’s order, a further action was started to clear about 5000 Jew-flats.”  Let me say that again “in accordance with SPEER’s order…”Evidently, this reveals Speer’s knowledge of Jewish deportation, and his uncanny ability as a technocrat to deceive Sereny. Hence, history has recorded that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to flourish through circumstantial encounters.

History has documented Speer as a manipulative character who cultivated his career as the MINISTER FOR ARMAMENTS. Speer was left as Hitler’s fitting accomplice to fuel the Nazi War Machine in 1942, after Fritz Todt’s death. As Armaments Minister, Speer prolonged the war for at least a year through increased armaments production, however millions of innocent Jews consequently died.  Circumstantial? Unfortunately, not… Speer manipulated this encounter, turning it into an opportunity to achieve the Nazi goal of “destruction through work.”   Speer attempted to manipulate his record in history after inspecting the Dora Camp, claiming “I pressed the SS… to improve sanitary conditions and upgrade the food” . Yet, Speer failed to end the use of slave labourers, which Sereny verifies, “when Speer wanted something, he went after it, and the human cost did not matter.  This record is further supported through Howell’s documentation, “By 1945 he [Speer] controlled a workforce of 14,000,000 that included forced labour…and Jewish slave workers.”  Ultimately, these records expose Speer’s manipulative ability to consistently please Hitler through extending the war AND the Final Solution. Evidently, history has recorded Speer’s egotism as the Minister for Armaments. Yet, how is it that such an influential opportunist can escape the death penalty, unlike so many others? 

Ultimately, as contentiously debated through the records of history, the Scorched Earth Policy saved Speer. It is questioned; Was Speer’s opposition to Hitler’s Nero Decree for his OWN benefit, or for the benefit of the German people? King documents Speer’s nationalism, “the second and succeeding world of Albert Speer… was a world of ethical and cultural value, a humanistic world.”  However, King has focused on Speer’s narrative in history, neglecting his opportunity to defy Hitler’s policy to ensure his power is maintained with the infrastructure. In contrast, Schmidt accurately documented Speer’s skilful manipulation to, “prevent the destruction of these bastions of his power" . As such, through the developing records of history, further insights of Speer’s volition to preserve HIMSELF are revealed. Van der Vat documents Speer’s intelligent foreshadowing, preparing his defence as early as April 1944, “From now on Speer’s own agenda would be paramount… in a campaign for the preservation of Albert Speer” .  With 9 months to prepare his ‘contrite’ demeanour at the Nuremberg Trials, Speer was able to live, when so many others died, was able to prosper, when so many others struggled. However, Trueman exposes that characteristics instilled in Speer from childhood guaranteed his survival as, “his lack of emotion and education… spared his life; full of contrition and apologies” . Van der Vat supports Trueman stating Speer “only escaped the death penalty at Nuremberg because he was a good liar”. Evidently, this reveals that history has recorded Speer’s notorious ability to manipulate circumstantial encounters.
 
Skilful and opportunistic- ALBERT SPEER manipulated the circumstance for his OWN benefit. As an enigmatic character in the records of history he has dominated debates through the construction of his own history. Yet, ultimately, through interpreting insightful historical records, his success relied on the encounters between character and circumstance. Thus, it can be confirmed, Berthold Konrad Hermann Albert Speer benefited HIS character notoriously through circumstantial encounters.

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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1164 on: June 03, 2018, 12:06:48 am »
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Hey ;D Its prob a bit late...but was just wondering if anyone would be interested in having a quick look at my 'speech' response to the trial question,
'History is the record of an encounter between character and circumstance.'
Evaluate this statement in relation to the personality you have studied.
I do Albert Speer- the presentation is due on Monday so if anyone has any time I would really appreciate it! ;D

Hey my comments are in the spoiler!

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It is not common for individuals to be truly selfless. Nor is it common for them to expose their own flaws. Albert Speer, a human, yet a Nazi, was no exception. HE embodies the hurdle between character and circumstances that ALL individuals face. However, unlike others: HE took every opportunity as this character, HE took every opportunity to manipulate HIS circumstances and HE took every opportunity to invest in HIMSELF. If this is a presentation, I really like the way you have made it engaging while also blending a thesis into it, that being that Speer took advantage of circumstance to gain influence.

Albert Speer was a self-invested opportunist. HE possessed the ability to craft his own history and mould his opportunistic character to any circumstance- whether it be as an architect, an armaments minister or as a guilty defendant. However, further insight has been gained through contentious historiography, affirming the statement, ‘history IS the record of an encounter between character and circumstances’. Like the first sentence but unsure what you mean by the second.

Evolving historical records have revealed that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to enrich his circumstance as the FIRST ARCHITECT of the Third Reich. (1934) Speer was recognised by the Nazi elite through his efficient redecoration of Nazi headquarters. It was these circumstantial encounters that Speer manipulated to impress elite Nazi officials… and HITLER.Well done, nice link. In his initial year as First Architect, Speer captivated the Nazis at the 1934 Nuremberg Rallies, through the renowned ‘Cathedral of Lights’. Consequently, as an admirable technocratic, Speer assumed control of the Germania Project in 1939. Controversially, Speer was directly subordinate to Hitler alone in this project which Fest documents as, “a kind of dictatorial status” . This account certifies that Speer was involved in the reallocation of 23,000 Jewish apartments.  Yet, it is still debated; Was Speer responsible for the deportation of Berlin Jews in 1941? Sereny sides with Speer’s historical art, “the early resettlement work…was purely administrative and it is unlikely that Speer himself knew much about the details involved.”  Yet, Sereny’s record has neglected to explore beyond Speer and is contradicted by Van der Vat’s evidence from a removed part of the Wolter Chronicles, “in accordance with Speer’s order, a further action was started to clear about 5000 Jew-flats.”  Let me say that again “in accordance with SPEER’s order…”Evidently, this reveals Speer’s knowledge of Jewish deportation, and his uncanny ability as a technocrat to deceive Sereny. Hence, history has recorded that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to flourish through circumstantial encounters. I don't think the historiography necessarily adds to your argument. Here it just confuses me as to how this shows that Speer took advantage of circumstance. If anything, you would argue that Speer took advantage of the anti-Semitic values at the time in the clearing of the Jew Flats to further his position within the Nazi regime.

History has documented Speer as a manipulative character who cultivated his career as the MINISTER FOR ARMAMENTS. I would avoid using the world manipulative to describe him. Words such as intuitive or perceptive more accurately answer the question. Speer was left as Hitler’s fitting accomplice to fuel the Nazi War Machine in 1942, after Fritz Todt’s death. As Armaments Minister, Speer prolonged the war for at least a year through increased armaments production, however millions of innocent Jews consequently died.  Circumstantial? Unfortunately, not… Speer manipulated this encounter, turning it into an opportunity to achieve the Nazi goal of “destruction through work.”   Speer attempted to manipulate his record in history after inspecting the Dora Camp, claiming “I pressed the SS… to improve sanitary conditions and upgrade the food” . Yet, Speer failed to end the use of slave labourers, which Sereny verifies, “when Speer wanted something, he went after it, and the human cost did not matter.  This record is further supported through Howell’s documentation, “By 1945 he [Speer] controlled a workforce of 14,000,000 that included forced labour…and Jewish slave workers.”  Ultimately, these records expose Speer’s manipulative ability to consistently please Hitler through extending the war AND the Final Solution. Evidently, history has recorded Speer’s egotism as the Minister for Armaments. Yet, how is it that such an influential opportunist can escape the death penalty, unlike so many others?  I am interested to hear what others think about this. Personally, I think this is delving into too much of an expose about revealing how Speer was manipulative and evil, which I think doesn't really relate to the question. I interpreted the question to be whether personalities are swept away/influenced by events/context or if they shape their own outcome.

Ultimately, as contentiously debated through the records of history, the Scorched Earth Policy saved Speer. It is questioned; Was Speer’s opposition to Hitler’s Nero Decree for his OWN benefit, or for the benefit of the German people? King documents Speer’s nationalism, “the second and succeeding world of Albert Speer… was a world of ethical and cultural value, a humanistic world.”  However, King has focused on Speer’s narrative in history, neglecting his opportunity to defy Hitler’s policy to ensure his power is maintained with the infrastructure. In contrast, Schmidt accurately documented Speer’s skilful manipulation to, “prevent the destruction of these bastions of his power" . As such, through the developing records of history, further insights of Speer’s volition to preserve HIMSELF are revealed. Van der Vat documents Speer’s intelligent foreshadowing, preparing his defence as early as April 1944, “From now on Speer’s own agenda would be paramount… in a campaign for the preservation of Albert Speer” .  With 9 months to prepare his ‘contrite’ demeanour at the Nuremberg Trials, Speer was able to live, when so many others died, was able to prosper, when so many others struggled. However, Trueman exposes that characteristics instilled in Speer from childhood guaranteed his survival as, “his lack of emotion and education… spared his life; full of contrition and apologies” . Van der Vat supports Trueman stating Speer “only escaped the death penalty at Nuremberg because he was a good liar”. Evidently, this reveals that history has recorded Speer’s notorious ability to manipulate circumstantial encounters. Too much historiography here! You lose your own voice which is really important in history! You want to use historiography a bit but use it essentially as a springboard to agree or disagree and further your argument.
 
Skilful and opportunistic- ALBERT SPEER manipulated the circumstance for his OWN benefit. As an enigmatic character in the records of history he has dominated debates through the construction of his own history. Yet, ultimately, through interpreting insightful historical records, his success relied on the encounters between character and circumstance. Thus, it can be confirmed, Berthold Konrad Hermann Albert Speer benefited HIS character notoriously through circumstantial encounters.
A very interesting essay! You interpreted the question very differently to what I would have expected when considering your arguments. Keen to hear what others think as personally, I interpreted as another way of saying: Was Speer a shaper of events or did was he shaped by events/context.

For instance, I would argue that he was shaped by circumstance early in his life when he, like many Germans, was captivated by Hitler's persuasiveness. In addition, he was shaped by circumstance in his indifference to anti-Semitism which you touched on. In contrast, he went against circumstance (context) in the Nuremberg Trials by presenting a very different attitude to the other Nazis, to his own benefit. His architectural work was shaped by circumstance as it was heavily influenced by Nazi values of dominance/permanency and his early rise to prominence was also an encounter with circumstance as he was swept up by opportunities that came his way (with Hanke etc.) Yet, his Armaments Ministry work was not as he revitalised the industry to increase ammunition output etc.

Hopefully that makes sense! Keen to hear what others think of your interpretation!

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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1165 on: June 03, 2018, 09:30:28 am »
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Hey Guys,

I'm having trouble finding a historian that links with the following statement (what is in bold):

Speer's ultimate prolongation of the Second World War is a prime example of how he made a major impact on his immediate context and made a significant mark on history. Being in a state of a two-front war, the internal Nazi organisation of powers and resources was nothing less than chaotic and inefficient.

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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1166 on: June 03, 2018, 09:42:42 am »
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Hi guys,

I have an essay question for the personality study: 'Chance rather than planning determines the role of significant figures in history" To what extent is this statement accurate in relation to the personality you have studied? (I'm studying Leni Riefenstahl)
Could anyone please give me some tips on how to approach this essay?

Thank you~
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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1167 on: June 03, 2018, 12:21:53 pm »
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Hey ;D Its prob a bit late...but was just wondering if anyone would be interested in having a quick look at my 'speech' response to the trial question,
'History is the record of an encounter between character and circumstance.'
Evaluate this statement in relation to the personality you have studied.
I do Albert Speer- the presentation is due on Monday so if anyone has any time I would really appreciate it! ;D
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It is not common for individuals to be truly selfless. Nor is it common for them to expose their own flaws. Albert Speer, a human, yet a Nazi, was no exception. HE embodies the hurdle between character and circumstances that ALL individuals face. However, unlike others: HE took every opportunity as this character, HE took every opportunity to manipulate HIS circumstances and HE took every opportunity to invest in HIMSELF.

Albert Speer was a self-invested opportunist. HE possessed the ability to craft his own history and mould his opportunistic character to any circumstance- whether it be as an architect, an armaments minister or as a guilty defendant. However, further insight has been gained through contentious historiography, affirming the statement, ‘history IS the record of an encounter between character and circumstances’.

Evolving historical records have revealed that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to enrich his circumstance as the FIRST ARCHITECT of the Third Reich. (1934) Speer was recognised by the Nazi elite through his efficient redecoration of Nazi headquarters. It was these circumstantial encounters that Speer manipulated to impress elite Nazi officials… and HITLER. In his initial year as First Architect, Speer captivated the Nazis at the 1934 Nuremberg Rallies, through the renowned ‘Cathedral of Lights’. Consequently, as an admirable technocratic, Speer assumed control of the Germania Project in 1939. Controversially, Speer was directly subordinate to Hitler alone in this project which Fest documents as, “a kind of dictatorial status” . This account certifies that Speer was involved in the reallocation of 23,000 Jewish apartments.  Yet, it is still debated; Was Speer responsible for the deportation of Berlin Jews in 1941? Sereny sides with Speer’s historical art, “the early resettlement work…was purely administrative and it is unlikely that Speer himself knew much about the details involved.”  Yet, Sereny’s record has neglected to explore beyond Speer and is contradicted by Van der Vat’s evidence from a removed part of the Wolter Chronicles, “in accordance with Speer’s order, a further action was started to clear about 5000 Jew-flats.”  Let me say that again “in accordance with SPEER’s order…”Evidently, this reveals Speer’s knowledge of Jewish deportation, and his uncanny ability as a technocrat to deceive Sereny. Hence, history has recorded that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to flourish through circumstantial encounters.

History has documented Speer as a manipulative character who cultivated his career as the MINISTER FOR ARMAMENTS. Speer was left as Hitler’s fitting accomplice to fuel the Nazi War Machine in 1942, after Fritz Todt’s death. As Armaments Minister, Speer prolonged the war for at least a year through increased armaments production, however millions of innocent Jews consequently died.  Circumstantial? Unfortunately, not… Speer manipulated this encounter, turning it into an opportunity to achieve the Nazi goal of “destruction through work.”   Speer attempted to manipulate his record in history after inspecting the Dora Camp, claiming “I pressed the SS… to improve sanitary conditions and upgrade the food” . Yet, Speer failed to end the use of slave labourers, which Sereny verifies, “when Speer wanted something, he went after it, and the human cost did not matter.  This record is further supported through Howell’s documentation, “By 1945 he [Speer] controlled a workforce of 14,000,000 that included forced labour…and Jewish slave workers.”  Ultimately, these records expose Speer’s manipulative ability to consistently please Hitler through extending the war AND the Final Solution. Evidently, history has recorded Speer’s egotism as the Minister for Armaments. Yet, how is it that such an influential opportunist can escape the death penalty, unlike so many others? 

Ultimately, as contentiously debated through the records of history, the Scorched Earth Policy saved Speer. It is questioned; Was Speer’s opposition to Hitler’s Nero Decree for his OWN benefit, or for the benefit of the German people? King documents Speer’s nationalism, “the second and succeeding world of Albert Speer… was a world of ethical and cultural value, a humanistic world.”  However, King has focused on Speer’s narrative in history, neglecting his opportunity to defy Hitler’s policy to ensure his power is maintained with the infrastructure. In contrast, Schmidt accurately documented Speer’s skilful manipulation to, “prevent the destruction of these bastions of his power" . As such, through the developing records of history, further insights of Speer’s volition to preserve HIMSELF are revealed. Van der Vat documents Speer’s intelligent foreshadowing, preparing his defence as early as April 1944, “From now on Speer’s own agenda would be paramount… in a campaign for the preservation of Albert Speer” .  With 9 months to prepare his ‘contrite’ demeanour at the Nuremberg Trials, Speer was able to live, when so many others died, was able to prosper, when so many others struggled. However, Trueman exposes that characteristics instilled in Speer from childhood guaranteed his survival as, “his lack of emotion and education… spared his life; full of contrition and apologies” . Van der Vat supports Trueman stating Speer “only escaped the death penalty at Nuremberg because he was a good liar”. Evidently, this reveals that history has recorded Speer’s notorious ability to manipulate circumstantial encounters.
 
Skilful and opportunistic- ALBERT SPEER manipulated the circumstance for his OWN benefit. As an enigmatic character in the records of history he has dominated debates through the construction of his own history. Yet, ultimately, through interpreting insightful historical records, his success relied on the encounters between character and circumstance. Thus, it can be confirmed, Berthold Konrad Hermann Albert Speer benefited HIS character notoriously through circumstantial encounters.

Thanks so much ;D ;)
Hey my comments are in the spoiler!

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It is not common for individuals to be truly selfless. Nor is it common for them to expose their own flaws. Albert Speer, a human, yet a Nazi, was no exception. HE embodies the hurdle between character and circumstances that ALL individuals face. However, unlike others: HE took every opportunity as this character, HE took every opportunity to manipulate HIS circumstances and HE took every opportunity to invest in HIMSELF. If this is a presentation, I really like the way you have made it engaging while also blending a thesis into it, that being that Speer took advantage of circumstance to gain influence.

Albert Speer was a self-invested opportunist. HE possessed the ability to craft his own history and mould his opportunistic character to any circumstance- whether it be as an architect, an armaments minister or as a guilty defendant. However, further insight has been gained through contentious historiography, affirming the statement, ‘history IS the record of an encounter between character and circumstances’. Like the first sentence but unsure what you mean by the second.

Evolving historical records have revealed that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to enrich his circumstance as the FIRST ARCHITECT of the Third Reich. (1934) Speer was recognised by the Nazi elite through his efficient redecoration of Nazi headquarters. It was these circumstantial encounters that Speer manipulated to impress elite Nazi officials… and HITLER.Well done, nice link. In his initial year as First Architect, Speer captivated the Nazis at the 1934 Nuremberg Rallies, through the renowned ‘Cathedral of Lights’. Consequently, as an admirable technocratic, Speer assumed control of the Germania Project in 1939. Controversially, Speer was directly subordinate to Hitler alone in this project which Fest documents as, “a kind of dictatorial status” . This account certifies that Speer was involved in the reallocation of 23,000 Jewish apartments.  Yet, it is still debated; Was Speer responsible for the deportation of Berlin Jews in 1941? Sereny sides with Speer’s historical art, “the early resettlement work…was purely administrative and it is unlikely that Speer himself knew much about the details involved.”  Yet, Sereny’s record has neglected to explore beyond Speer and is contradicted by Van der Vat’s evidence from a removed part of the Wolter Chronicles, “in accordance with Speer’s order, a further action was started to clear about 5000 Jew-flats.”  Let me say that again “in accordance with SPEER’s order…”Evidently, this reveals Speer’s knowledge of Jewish deportation, and his uncanny ability as a technocrat to deceive Sereny. Hence, history has recorded that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to flourish through circumstantial encounters. I don't think the historiography necessarily adds to your argument. Here it just confuses me as to how this shows that Speer took advantage of circumstance. If anything, you would argue that Speer took advantage of the anti-Semitic values at the time in the clearing of the Jew Flats to further his position within the Nazi regime.

History has documented Speer as a manipulative character who cultivated his career as the MINISTER FOR ARMAMENTS. I would avoid using the world manipulative to describe him. Words such as intuitive or perceptive more accurately answer the question. Speer was left as Hitler’s fitting accomplice to fuel the Nazi War Machine in 1942, after Fritz Todt’s death. As Armaments Minister, Speer prolonged the war for at least a year through increased armaments production, however millions of innocent Jews consequently died.  Circumstantial? Unfortunately, not… Speer manipulated this encounter, turning it into an opportunity to achieve the Nazi goal of “destruction through work.”   Speer attempted to manipulate his record in history after inspecting the Dora Camp, claiming “I pressed the SS… to improve sanitary conditions and upgrade the food” . Yet, Speer failed to end the use of slave labourers, which Sereny verifies, “when Speer wanted something, he went after it, and the human cost did not matter.  This record is further supported through Howell’s documentation, “By 1945 he [Speer] controlled a workforce of 14,000,000 that included forced labour…and Jewish slave workers.”  Ultimately, these records expose Speer’s manipulative ability to consistently please Hitler through extending the war AND the Final Solution. Evidently, history has recorded Speer’s egotism as the Minister for Armaments. Yet, how is it that such an influential opportunist can escape the death penalty, unlike so many others?  I am interested to hear what others think about this. Personally, I think this is delving into too much of an expose about revealing how Speer was manipulative and evil, which I think doesn't really relate to the question. I interpreted the question to be whether personalities are swept away/influenced by events/context or if they shape their own outcome.

Ultimately, as contentiously debated through the records of history, the Scorched Earth Policy saved Speer. It is questioned; Was Speer’s opposition to Hitler’s Nero Decree for his OWN benefit, or for the benefit of the German people? King documents Speer’s nationalism, “the second and succeeding world of Albert Speer… was a world of ethical and cultural value, a humanistic world.”  However, King has focused on Speer’s narrative in history, neglecting his opportunity to defy Hitler’s policy to ensure his power is maintained with the infrastructure. In contrast, Schmidt accurately documented Speer’s skilful manipulation to, “prevent the destruction of these bastions of his power" . As such, through the developing records of history, further insights of Speer’s volition to preserve HIMSELF are revealed. Van der Vat documents Speer’s intelligent foreshadowing, preparing his defence as early as April 1944, “From now on Speer’s own agenda would be paramount… in a campaign for the preservation of Albert Speer” .  With 9 months to prepare his ‘contrite’ demeanour at the Nuremberg Trials, Speer was able to live, when so many others died, was able to prosper, when so many others struggled. However, Trueman exposes that characteristics instilled in Speer from childhood guaranteed his survival as, “his lack of emotion and education… spared his life; full of contrition and apologies” . Van der Vat supports Trueman stating Speer “only escaped the death penalty at Nuremberg because he was a good liar”. Evidently, this reveals that history has recorded Speer’s notorious ability to manipulate circumstantial encounters. Too much historiography here! You lose your own voice which is really important in history! You want to use historiography a bit but use it essentially as a springboard to agree or disagree and further your argument.
 
Skilful and opportunistic- ALBERT SPEER manipulated the circumstance for his OWN benefit. As an enigmatic character in the records of history he has dominated debates through the construction of his own history. Yet, ultimately, through interpreting insightful historical records, his success relied on the encounters between character and circumstance. Thus, it can be confirmed, Berthold Konrad Hermann Albert Speer benefited HIS character notoriously through circumstantial encounters.
A very interesting essay! You interpreted the question very differently to what I would have expected when considering your arguments. Keen to hear what others think as personally, I interpreted as another way of saying: Was Speer a shaper of events or did was he shaped by events/context.

For instance, I would argue that he was shaped by circumstance early in his life when he, like many Germans, was captivated by Hitler's persuasiveness. In addition, he was shaped by circumstance in his indifference to anti-Semitism which you touched on. In contrast, he went against circumstance (context) in the Nuremberg Trials by presenting a very different attitude to the other Nazis, to his own benefit. His architectural work was shaped by circumstance as it was heavily influenced by Nazi values of dominance/permanency and his early rise to prominence was also an encounter with circumstance as he was swept up by opportunities that came his way (with Hanke etc.) Yet, his Armaments Ministry work was not as he revitalised the industry to increase ammunition output etc.

Hopefully that makes sense! Keen to hear what others think of your interpretation!



Hey,

I interpreted the question the same way dancing phalanges did hahaha, so shaped by events or shaper of events. I didn't do Speer so I can't make any comments on content, but that was my take on the question lol.

Hey Guys,

I'm having trouble finding a historian that links with the following statement (what is in bold):

Speer's ultimate prolongation of the Second World War is a prime example of how he made a major impact on his immediate context and made a significant mark on history. Being in a state of a two-front war, the internal Nazi organisation of powers and resources was nothing less than chaotic and inefficient.

Thanks in advance!



Hey,

I tried to find something on that but came up with nothing. I did find something that said Nazism was like "organised chaos" but I couldn't attribute that to a source. If you are looking for historians though, your textbook (if you have one) is a great first point of reference, and if you can't find any in there then journal articles are a great source of quotes.

Sorry I couldn't be of any more help!

Hi guys,

I have an essay question for the personality study: 'Chance rather than planning determines the role of significant figures in history" To what extent is this statement accurate in relation to the personality you have studied? (I'm studying Leni Riefenstahl)
Could anyone please give me some tips on how to approach this essay?

Thank you~
theyam :)

Hey,

I didn't study Riefenstahl so I can't give any pointers on what to write about her, but I've interpreted this question a bit like this: is the reason for Riefenstahl's significance a result of just chance/the situation she was in? 

Sorry I couldn't help you more!
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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1168 on: June 03, 2018, 01:02:01 pm »
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Hey Guys, If anyone can have a read of my essay on the following question that would be great:

‘To be significant, an individual must contribute to change.’ To what extent does this statement apply to the personality you have studied?

INTRODUCTION:
To a great extent, contribution to change is an essential element in being historically significant. Such an idea applies profoundly to Albert Speer as he not only had an impact upon his immediate Nazi context and the course of the war, but also the societal understanding of his own character and the Nazi legacy itself. Throughout this presentation, it will be argued that Speer’s impact was not limited to the Nazi movement and the Second World War. However, his contribution to change extends to the progression of the ripple effects of these events and the writing of history itself in relation to the following; prolonging the war by 2 years, his unique approach to culpability at the Nuremberg Trials and the pinnacle of them all, writing ‘Inside The Third Reich’ and by contributing to the writing itself and modern societal perception held today. Therefore, it is made evident to a great extent that through the extreme changes Speer has contributed to is ultimately the reason why he is such an important figure in history.

PARAGRAPH 1 - PROLONGED THE WAR BY 2 YEARS
Speer's ultimate prolongation of the Second World War is a prime example of how he made a major impact on his immediate context and made a significant mark on history. Being in a state of a two-front war, the internal Nazi organisation of powers and resources was nothing less than chaotic and inefficient (I need help finding a historian). It was under Speer’s authority as the Minister of Armaments in World War Two he significantly increased Germany's ability to fight back against the Allies in the war by reforming the armaments industry to maximise production efficiency. In his own words of his own contribution through his position as Minister of Armaments, “I prolonged that war by many months.” Although the architect had very limited knowledge of the industry, he had expert organisational skills. In fact, in the first six months of Speer’s appointment in this position, production of guns increased by 27% and ammunition production increased by 97%, which ultimately reveals the immense impact he had on the war effort. Moreover, through Speer’s implementation of a system of specialisation in the production of all resources, he thereby as Sereny suggested: “was single-handedly responsible for the improvement of the economy.” Hence, it is speculated that his reorganisation of the economy was so effective that Speer actually extended the Nazi’s ability to fight in the Second World War by up to two years and is ultimately the reason why Speer is still significant to this day.

PARAGRAPH 2 - NUREMBERG TRIALS - I need help cutting down this paragraph, I think its too long.
Although on a national scale his contributions as Armaments Minister made him a prominent figure, his actions at the Nuremberg trials ultimately led to Speer to becoming such a significant figure in history. The aim of Nuremberg War Crimes Trials according to the London Charter was to “bring to trial and punish the major war criminals of the Axis countries.” It is considered to be one of the most monumental events in the history as the Nazi leaders were put under the spotlight for being accused of crimes against peace, humanity and war crimes. At the Nuremberg Trials Speer took a unique approach. Although he pleaded not guilty to the four counts, as did all the other Nazi Leaders, he did not attempt to deny his responsibility for the actions of the Nazi regime. He refused to use the argument, as the others did, that he was just following orders. Speer’s composure and obvious intellect at the trials, as well as his frankness and openness of his acknowledgement of the atrocities of the Reich ultimately changed the generalisations made that all Nazis are inherently evil by displaying empathetic thought and essentially allowed him to separate himself from the other Nazi’s. Moreover, although he denied that he knew of the mass murders of the Jews in Eastern Europe, he admitted that, as apart of the regime, he had to accept responsibility for the actions of the regime. Whether in genuine remorse or through calculated planning to avoid the hangman, Speer admitted that he had carried out the orders he received. Ultimately, if Speer had not changed the public perception of him through his remorseful attitude, he would have simply blended in with all the other Nazis who all instead swore an oath to protect Hitler's name in the trials. Although Speer was found guilty of crimes against humanity and war crimes and as a result, was sentenced to 20 years in prison, Speer not only managed to escape with his life, unlike the 12 out 21 accused Nazi leaders were found guilty and sentenced to death, but he also recreated an image of himself as a sympathetic technocrat.

PARAGRAPH 3: ‘Inside the Third Reich’
Moreover, the apex of all of Speer’s changes was writing ‘Inside the Third Reich.’ Through this, it fundamentally provided Speer with the opportunity to present a direct and first-hand insight into the workings of the Nazi party, Nazi Germany in World War Two and his role and experience of both as a prominent Nazi Leader.

- I need help with the paragraph, I think it is a really good idea just not sure how I can elaborate on it.

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Re: HSC Modern History Question Thread
« Reply #1169 on: June 03, 2018, 11:23:30 pm »
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Hey my comments are in the spoiler!

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It is not common for individuals to be truly selfless. Nor is it common for them to expose their own flaws. Albert Speer, a human, yet a Nazi, was no exception. HE embodies the hurdle between character and circumstances that ALL individuals face. However, unlike others: HE took every opportunity as this character, HE took every opportunity to manipulate HIS circumstances and HE took every opportunity to invest in HIMSELF. If this is a presentation, I really like the way you have made it engaging while also blending a thesis into it, that being that Speer took advantage of circumstance to gain influence.

Albert Speer was a self-invested opportunist. HE possessed the ability to craft his own history and mould his opportunistic character to any circumstance- whether it be as an architect, an armaments minister or as a guilty defendant. However, further insight has been gained through contentious historiography, affirming the statement, ‘history IS the record of an encounter between character and circumstances’. Like the first sentence but unsure what you mean by the second.

Evolving historical records have revealed that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to enrich his circumstance as the FIRST ARCHITECT of the Third Reich. (1934) Speer was recognised by the Nazi elite through his efficient redecoration of Nazi headquarters. It was these circumstantial encounters that Speer manipulated to impress elite Nazi officials… and HITLER.Well done, nice link. In his initial year as First Architect, Speer captivated the Nazis at the 1934 Nuremberg Rallies, through the renowned ‘Cathedral of Lights’. Consequently, as an admirable technocratic, Speer assumed control of the Germania Project in 1939. Controversially, Speer was directly subordinate to Hitler alone in this project which Fest documents as, “a kind of dictatorial status” . This account certifies that Speer was involved in the reallocation of 23,000 Jewish apartments.  Yet, it is still debated; Was Speer responsible for the deportation of Berlin Jews in 1941? Sereny sides with Speer’s historical art, “the early resettlement work…was purely administrative and it is unlikely that Speer himself knew much about the details involved.”  Yet, Sereny’s record has neglected to explore beyond Speer and is contradicted by Van der Vat’s evidence from a removed part of the Wolter Chronicles, “in accordance with Speer’s order, a further action was started to clear about 5000 Jew-flats.”  Let me say that again “in accordance with SPEER’s order…”Evidently, this reveals Speer’s knowledge of Jewish deportation, and his uncanny ability as a technocrat to deceive Sereny. Hence, history has recorded that Speer’s opportunism enabled him to flourish through circumstantial encounters. I don't think the historiography necessarily adds to your argument. Here it just confuses me as to how this shows that Speer took advantage of circumstance. If anything, you would argue that Speer took advantage of the anti-Semitic values at the time in the clearing of the Jew Flats to further his position within the Nazi regime.

History has documented Speer as a manipulative character who cultivated his career as the MINISTER FOR ARMAMENTS. I would avoid using the world manipulative to describe him. Words such as intuitive or perceptive more accurately answer the question. Speer was left as Hitler’s fitting accomplice to fuel the Nazi War Machine in 1942, after Fritz Todt’s death. As Armaments Minister, Speer prolonged the war for at least a year through increased armaments production, however millions of innocent Jews consequently died.  Circumstantial? Unfortunately, not… Speer manipulated this encounter, turning it into an opportunity to achieve the Nazi goal of “destruction through work.”   Speer attempted to manipulate his record in history after inspecting the Dora Camp, claiming “I pressed the SS… to improve sanitary conditions and upgrade the food” . Yet, Speer failed to end the use of slave labourers, which Sereny verifies, “when Speer wanted something, he went after it, and the human cost did not matter.  This record is further supported through Howell’s documentation, “By 1945 he [Speer] controlled a workforce of 14,000,000 that included forced labour…and Jewish slave workers.”  Ultimately, these records expose Speer’s manipulative ability to consistently please Hitler through extending the war AND the Final Solution. Evidently, history has recorded Speer’s egotism as the Minister for Armaments. Yet, how is it that such an influential opportunist can escape the death penalty, unlike so many others?  I am interested to hear what others think about this. Personally, I think this is delving into too much of an expose about revealing how Speer was manipulative and evil, which I think doesn't really relate to the question. I interpreted the question to be whether personalities are swept away/influenced by events/context or if they shape their own outcome.

Ultimately, as contentiously debated through the records of history, the Scorched Earth Policy saved Speer. It is questioned; Was Speer’s opposition to Hitler’s Nero Decree for his OWN benefit, or for the benefit of the German people? King documents Speer’s nationalism, “the second and succeeding world of Albert Speer… was a world of ethical and cultural value, a humanistic world.”  However, King has focused on Speer’s narrative in history, neglecting his opportunity to defy Hitler’s policy to ensure his power is maintained with the infrastructure. In contrast, Schmidt accurately documented Speer’s skilful manipulation to, “prevent the destruction of these bastions of his power" . As such, through the developing records of history, further insights of Speer’s volition to preserve HIMSELF are revealed. Van der Vat documents Speer’s intelligent foreshadowing, preparing his defence as early as April 1944, “From now on Speer’s own agenda would be paramount… in a campaign for the preservation of Albert Speer” .  With 9 months to prepare his ‘contrite’ demeanour at the Nuremberg Trials, Speer was able to live, when so many others died, was able to prosper, when so many others struggled. However, Trueman exposes that characteristics instilled in Speer from childhood guaranteed his survival as, “his lack of emotion and education… spared his life; full of contrition and apologies” . Van der Vat supports Trueman stating Speer “only escaped the death penalty at Nuremberg because he was a good liar”. Evidently, this reveals that history has recorded Speer’s notorious ability to manipulate circumstantial encounters. Too much historiography here! You lose your own voice which is really important in history! You want to use historiography a bit but use it essentially as a springboard to agree or disagree and further your argument.
 
Skilful and opportunistic- ALBERT SPEER manipulated the circumstance for his OWN benefit. As an enigmatic character in the records of history he has dominated debates through the construction of his own history. Yet, ultimately, through interpreting insightful historical records, his success relied on the encounters between character and circumstance. Thus, it can be confirmed, Berthold Konrad Hermann Albert Speer benefited HIS character notoriously through circumstantial encounters.
A very interesting essay! You interpreted the question very differently to what I would have expected when considering your arguments. Keen to hear what others think as personally, I interpreted as another way of saying: Was Speer a shaper of events or did was he shaped by events/context.

For instance, I would argue that he was shaped by circumstance early in his life when he, like many Germans, was captivated by Hitler's persuasiveness. In addition, he was shaped by circumstance in his indifference to anti-Semitism which you touched on. In contrast, he went against circumstance (context) in the Nuremberg Trials by presenting a very different attitude to the other Nazis, to his own benefit. His architectural work was shaped by circumstance as it was heavily influenced by Nazi values of dominance/permanency and his early rise to prominence was also an encounter with circumstance as he was swept up by opportunities that came his way (with Hanke etc.) Yet, his Armaments Ministry work was not as he revitalised the industry to increase ammunition output etc.

Hopefully that makes sense! Keen to hear what others think of your interpretation!


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