Help. Meeeeee....
I have to answer this essay question and once again I've left it to the last minute.
I had some personal issues that stopped me from doing it earlier but now aaaahh.
Assess the role of Ho Chi Minh in the rise of Vietnamese nationalism and communism throughout the period 1954-1964.
This is the question. I am so stuck. All I've got so far is a thesis:
"Though Ho Chi Minh was instrumental in the rise of Vietnamese communism in the period between 1954 and 1964, the already existent Vietnamese nationalism was merely harnessed to his advantage."
Heeelpppp.
As Jake said, didn't study this unfortunately
I'm assuming this is for the Conflict in Indochina unit (just because I know that Ho Chi Minh is also a personality study option - this type of question doesn't look like one you could receive for that section, but just want to make sure!)? However, even though I haven't studied this, structurally I might be able to help you out a bit! In terms of your thesis, it looks like you are setting yourself up to write a differentiated essay, which is super awesome, and when done well, really sophisticated
A differentiated essay allows you to discuss other factors alongside the stem (ie. Ho Chi Minh in this instance). With that in mind, you have two options;
a) Ho Chi Minh was the underpinning factor - in this instance, you want to argue that he had a significant influence over all the other factors. Each paragraph will focus on another issue, but how Ho Chi Minh directly related to/influenced it, thus asserting him to be the most critical factor.
b) Ho Chi Minh was one of many interrelated and important factors - Each paragraph is on a different factor (make sure that Ho Chi Minh paragraph is the first/largest paragraph though!), asserting that they all worked in tandem, and cannot be ignored, when assessing the rise of nationalism and communism!
Though content wise I don't know much, we did a bit on indochina in Year 11. I remember my teacher once saying that he didn't think that Ho Chi Minh was that committed to Communism, more so that he used communism as a vehicle to achieve Vietnamese nationalism - maybe something you could discuss? Taking a look at the syllabus, my gut is telling me that other things you'd want to mention would be; Victory against the French, Impact of US foreign policy and intervention in Indochina and maybe the Second Indochina War? Again, I don't know if that is exactly correct as I didn't study the unit, just took a look at the syllabus and made a guess.
Hope this helps! Sorry I could not be more specific with my advice,
Susie