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« Reply #735 on: September 08, 2017, 04:43:00 pm »
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Maybe I'm mistaken (we didn't cover the Constituent Assembly a great deal last year, beyond its closing down being a factor in the White Army's decision to launch a Civil War), but I believe that they actually did NOT have the majority at the time! That was the problem, as the Social Revolutionaries won the election 370-175 - prompting Lenin and the Bolsheviks to just ignore the vote and close down the Constituent Assembly. Furthermore, you could probably argue that by giving more groups a voice, each of which are representing their own interests, that even if your voice is the loudest your ability to go after your own interests can be limited by the collective effort of the rest of the Assembly. That is my interpretation of it, however as I said we didn't cover this area in great depth.
Holly crap for something thats not convered in great depth that was so well done. Thank you xox
Also why did Moscow resist bolshevik takeover and why was there so much resentment against the bolsheviks

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« Reply #736 on: September 08, 2017, 10:31:01 pm »
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Holly crap for something thats not convered in great depth that was so well done. Thank you xox
Also why did Moscow resist bolshevik takeover and why was there so much resentment against the bolsheviks
Depends on which timeframe you're talking about as to the specific reason behind resentment directed at the Bolsheviks, but it was generally because they promised all these great improvements if they were in power - they had all these decrees in the early period of their power that promised to make life better for the Russian people.
However, they were very one-party power orientated - they did not want any form of opposition. Inevitably, they faced both political and military opposition, and they dealt with these pretty brutally.
Also, War Communism was not particularly popular - and you only need to look at what it involved to see why. This bred significant resentment. Then there was famine, and all that stuff - a recipe for disaster.

The Russian people had only recently escaped the autocracy of the Romanov dynasty. Ultimately, some of the stuff the Bolsheviks did made them not so different to the Romanovs in the eyes of an everyday Russian.

In terms of why Moscow resisted Bolshevik takeover - I don't have the best explanation, so I'll leave it to someone else :)

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« Reply #737 on: September 08, 2017, 10:55:14 pm »
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Holly crap for something thats not convered in great depth that was so well done. Thank you xox
Also why did Moscow resist bolshevik takeover and why was there so much resentment against the bolsheviks
Hey! I'm a bit confused with the wording of your question (maybe its a VCE thing?) - why did "Moscow" resist bolshevik takeover? Do you mean the city itself or just the Kremlin? Again, this isn't something that the HSC looks at at all really aha, but from a quick google search I gather that the Moscow duma attempted to resist? But it wasn't very successful - their reason I'm sure was that they wanted to maintain power for themselves. But yeah, that's kinda all I have aha. In terms of resentment, K888's answer is spot on! Definitely was a progressive thing though - like they were VERY popular with the people at the beginning, particularly right after the 1917 revolution when they introduced their early social and political reforms. However, as things progressed (harshness of the Treaty of Brest-Litovsk, Civil War, War Communism, etc. ) things definitely took a turn for the worst for Bolshevik popularity!

Hope this helps! Sorry I couldn't help more :(

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« Reply #738 on: September 10, 2017, 12:19:55 pm »
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Depends on which timeframe you're talking about as to the specific reason behind resentment directed at the Bolsheviks, but it was generally because they promised all these great improvements if they were in power - they had all these decrees in the early period of their power that promised to make life better for the Russian people.
However, they were very one-party power orientated - they did not want any form of opposition. Inevitably, they faced both political and military opposition, and they dealt with these pretty brutally.
Also, War Communism was not particularly popular - and you only need to look at what it involved to see why. This bred significant resentment. Then there was famine, and all that stuff - a recipe for disaster.

The Russian people had only recently escaped the autocracy of the Romanov dynasty. Ultimately, some of the stuff the Bolsheviks did made them not so different to the Romanovs in the eyes of an everyday Russian.

In terms of why Moscow resisted Bolshevik takeover - I don't have the best explanation, so I'll leave it to someone else :)
"When news of the Soviet revolution reached Moscow, Colonel Ryabtsev, the local Provisional Government garrison commander there, imposed martial law and began rallying troops to resist the coming Bolshevik assault. Ryabtsev’s forces were supported by Moscow factory workers, who initiated a general strike. After a week of bitter fighting and an unknown number of deaths, probably in the hundreds, Milrevcom forces captured Moscow. By March 1918 Lenin and his committee had moved the national capital to Moscow and installed themselves in the Kremlin."

I think that occured due to the mensheviks and moderate SRs hating Lenin's seizure of power in the october revolution as by Lenin doing this he had collectivley seized all power by force as the bolesheviks now had power
Hey! I'm a bit confused with the wording of your question (maybe its a VCE thing?) - why did "Moscow" resist bolshevik takeover? Do you mean the city itself or just the Kremlin? Again, this isn't something that the HSC looks at at all really aha, but from a quick google search I gather that the Moscow duma attempted to resist? But it wasn't very successful - their reason I'm sure was that they wanted to maintain power for themselves. But yeah, that's kinda all I have aha. In terms of resentment, K888's answer is spot on! Definitely was a progressive thing though - like they were VERY popular with the people at the beginning, particularly right after the 1917 revolution when they introduced their early social and political reforms. However, as things progressed (harshness of the Treaty of Brest-Litovsk, Civil War, War Communism, etc. ) things definitely took a turn for the worst for Bolshevik popularity!

Hope this helps! Sorry I couldn't help more :(

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Its just the forum of history in vce is kinda dead
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« Reply #739 on: September 10, 2017, 05:33:05 pm »
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"When news of the Soviet revolution reached Moscow, Colonel Ryabtsev, the local Provisional Government garrison commander there, imposed martial law and began rallying troops to resist the coming Bolshevik assault. Ryabtsev’s forces were supported by Moscow factory workers, who initiated a general strike. After a week of bitter fighting and an unknown number of deaths, probably in the hundreds, Milrevcom forces captured Moscow. By March 1918 Lenin and his committee had moved the national capital to Moscow and installed themselves in the Kremlin."

I think that occured due to the mensheviks and moderate SRs hating Lenin's seizure of power in the october revolution as by Lenin doing this he had collectivley seized all power by force as the bolesheviks now had power

Yeah it is 3/4 in vce
Its just the forum of history in vce is kinda dead
Seems like you've got your answer there! :)

In terms of the VCE History section - I'd really love it if you could direct your questions there, I studied Russia and China so can help out with those aspects of Revs, and there are other users around who have done Revs in the past. I say this because it streamlines things if we can keep them separate, and we avoid confusing people about what may or may not be on their syllabuses :)
Also, posting there encourages activity from other users, and will help make that aspect of the forum more alive!

I'll try to answer any questions you post ASAP, but I'm sure the NSW History people will also be happy to pop their heads into the VCE thread and help! Plus, if I haven't answered a question within a few days (say maybe, 3? I've got to balance helping out between uni commitments, too), feel free to send me a PM to remind me! I sometimes just don't see the questions or might just forget to answer :) 

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« Reply #740 on: September 12, 2017, 06:23:47 pm »
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Russia question I just did (paraphrasing slightly) - "To what extent did Bolshevik social, economic and political reforms enable the party to consolidate their power from 1917 - 1928?"

CoP questions that I've seen normally focus on the period up to and including the NEP post 1921. When answering this, what else can I consider in the period 1921-1928 apart from the continuation of the NEP and the creation of the GPU/OGPU a few years later?

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« Reply #741 on: September 12, 2017, 06:32:49 pm »
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Russia question I just did (paraphrasing slightly) - "To what extent did Bolshevik social, economic and political reforms enable the party to consolidate their power from 1917 - 1928?"

CoP questions that I've seen normally focus on the period up to and including the NEP post 1921. When answering this, what else can I consider in the period 1921-1928 apart from the continuation of the NEP and the creation of the GPU/OGPU a few years later?
Interesting! Yeah, typically B-COP questions will end at 1921, however tbh my teacher has been predicting something like this happening (mainly a "power struggles" essay that spans the entire time frame, from Bolsheviks to Stalinism). In terms of social, economic and political reforms, I'd have a look at some of the stuff happening during the power struggle, particularly in regards to Lenin's Levy, and the shift in ideology from Permanent Revolution to Socialism-in-one-country! How did the Bolsheviks maintain power after the devastation of the Civil War, whereby they lost many of their old party members, and a lot of their popularity?

But yeah, interesting stuff! Would love to see your response once it's completed :)

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« Reply #742 on: September 12, 2017, 06:58:31 pm »
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Interesting! Yeah, typically B-COP questions will end at 1921, however tbh my teacher has been predicting something like this happening (mainly a "power struggles" essay that spans the entire time frame, from Bolsheviks to Stalinism). In terms of social, economic and political reforms, I'd have a look at some of the stuff happening during the power struggle, particularly in regards to Lenin's Levy, and the shift in ideology from Permanent Revolution to Socialism-in-one-country! How did the Bolsheviks maintain power after the devastation of the Civil War, whereby they lost many of their old party members, and a lot of their popularity?

But yeah, interesting stuff! Would love to see your response once it's completed :)

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Interesting stuff, my class work and textbooks mostly focus on leadership issues during that time - I suppose it's what the syllabus emphasises. On the one hand they've shifted towards more difficult questions for personalities, but there's been no evidence of that for 25 mark questions at least for the topics I study. I hope they don't begin far-flung questions this year lol

I actually did the question under exam conditions and basically winged the 1921-28 period saying the establishment of a permanent secret police rather than a temporary extraordinary war/anti-capitalist organisation worked in hand with the NEP to a): discourage popular protest and b): crack down on opposition that did occur. Just not sure whether to study the stuff you've mentioned as it was a harder trial paper question - not too sure how likely the CoP in that period is to be assessed  :-\ teacher might have some ideas which I'll share if there's anything beyond what you mentioned.

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« Reply #743 on: September 12, 2017, 07:24:21 pm »
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Interesting stuff, my class work and textbooks mostly focus on leadership issues during that time - I suppose it's what the syllabus emphasises. On the one hand they've shifted towards more difficult questions for personalities, but there's been no evidence of that for 25 mark questions at least for the topics I study. I hope they don't begin far-flung questions this year lol

I actually did the question under exam conditions and basically winged the 1921-28 period saying the establishment of a permanent secret police rather than a temporary extraordinary war/anti-capitalist organisation worked in hand with the NEP to a): discourage popular protest and b): crack down on opposition that did occur. Just not sure whether to study the stuff you've mentioned as it was a harder trial paper question - not too sure how likely the CoP in that period is to be assessed  :-\ teacher might have some ideas which I'll share if there's anything beyond what you mentioned.
Sounds good! I wouldn't have thought to discuss the secret police - great work! Yeah I don't know how likely it is either (my current prediction for HSC is a power struggles and a soviet foreign policy essay cos its one of the only pairings they've never done aha), but doesn't hurt to prepare for it - at the very least, its good content revision! I don't know whether they'd make a move towards "harder" 25 mark questions (particularly considering the syllabus change comes into affect very soon), but you never know! A leadership struggle question spanning the entire period wouldn't necessarily be that hard. Definitely out there, and would throw a lot of people, but there is definitely a lot to talk about - Trotsky/Lenin, Trotsky/Stalin/(and Kamenev, Zinoviev and Bukharin), Stalin/everyone, etc. etc. :)
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« Reply #744 on: September 12, 2017, 08:07:56 pm »
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Hello Susie,

My Modern History teacher is very vague in giving feedback. Could you please review my essay (if you have time) and could you please give some moderate feedback. Thanks, Isho. My essay is on - INTERNATIONAL PEACE AND CONFLICT - CONFLICT IN EUROPE 1935-1945

Question - "To what extent were the dictatorships in Germany and Italy responsible for the growth of European tensions"

It is highly critical that during the decade which preceded the outbreak of the Second World War, two dictators rose to power, Adolf Hitler of Germany and Benito Mussolini of Italy. The expansionist and fascist ideals of both dictators was the impetus for the growth of tension in Europe, till the outbreak. However, despite their primary responsibility in the formulation of these tensions, these tensions did not equate directly to the outbreak of war, but instead hold a catalytic significance to a number of events which led to the outbreak of war in Europe in 1939, namely the failure of the League of Nations, the policy of appeasement and the significance of the Nazi-Soviet Non Aggression Pact. Therefore it is clear that the dictatorships in Germany and Italy were highly responsible for the growth of European tensions.
Adolf Hitler became German Fuhrer in 1934, and granted himself the dictatorship of Germany. His aggressive foreign policy and motives behind the expansion of the German Empire (known as Lebensraum) significantly influenced his actions in instigating tensions. Hitler’s foreign policy was based upon avenging the injustices of the Treaty of Versailles on Germany and retuning the empire to its former glory. As such, his actions were expansionist and imperialist, with the continual annexation of ‘rightful German territory’. Hitler’s remilitarisation of the Rhineland in 1936, the ‘Anschluss’ of the late 1930s and the occupation of the Sudetenland and Czechoslovakia were all catalytic, aggressive actions, which, having met no resistance, signalled the imminence of war. Hitler’s belief or ‘lebensraum’ (living space), which he referred to in his diary ‘Mein Kampf’ and the power of the ‘Volkgemeinschaft’ (pure German racial power in Europe); instigated his aggressive expansionist motives. Similarly, however to a lesser degree, Mussolini’s empirical motives through the revival of the Roman Empire, led him to invade Abyssinia and neighbouring countries, as did Hitler and Mussolini both had a powerfully catalytic effect on the creation and growth of tensions leading up to 1939. Their aggressive, fascist and expansionist actions inaugurates them as a focal part of the outbreak of war. Furthermore, the powerlessness of the League, intended arbiter of collective security, in preventing Italy’s Abyssinian invasion and German and Italian interference in the Spanish Civil War, allowed Benito Mussolini and Adolf Hitler to assert their dominance by claiming territories and extensively, militarising, thereby exacerbating European tensions. The lack of political consensus and military resources undermined any capacity for the League to enforce collective security. Additionally, failed attempts to appease Germany, allowed expansion of its’ militaristic and territorial dominance, thus heightening European animosity. The League’s intended aim of collective security failed due to the nationalistic priorities of member nations, which destroyed the possibility of mutual peace and sparked European conflict. Following 1919, the internationalist ideal of peace ensured by member nations collectively defending victims of aggression, was an impractical notion for world peace. A desire for security and national economic prosperity spawned support for Nationalist Conservatives and burgeoning fascist movements. There it is clear that both Hitler and Mussolini were highly responsible for contributing the growth of tensions in Europe.
Thus, in addition to Hitler and Mussolini’s involvement in contributing to the growth of European tensions, Appeasement was a highly critical turning point in the second world war and contributed to the growth of European tensions. Appeasement was a major foreign policy that was used with little success by nations such as France and Britain against the aggressive powers Germany and Italy. It allowed for them to develop into states that were prepared for international conflict and empowered by the apparent weakness of the international community. It allowed the aggressors to rearm and gain territorial advantage over the eventual allied powers, greatly influencing their ability to go to war during the 1940s. Appeasement during and after the Second World War has been viewed exceptionally negatively, saying that it was one of the main causes of the war. Appeasement at the time, however, did seem like the logical solution. Britain and France were in no position to go to war to defend the Treaty of Versailles after the Great Depression, and the British public viewed many of Hitler’s policies as reasonable, with him simply restoring some of Germany’s liberties as a sovereign nation. This included allowing Germany to increase its military assets through rearmament in 1935. Hitler, during the period obtained support by building upon the Western’s world anti-communist sentiments, showing that Germany would need to fend them off to prevent the spread into Europe. He also attempted to gain support through the concept of equality, saying that Germany had the right to protect itself like any other nation. This led to the Allies seeing rearmament as inevitable, rather than something that could be controlled. Similar arguments were used for conscription, receiving only a minor protest from Britain, James Levy suggests that this helped to increase Germany and Italy’s potential for war, especially through allowances such as the Anglo-German Naval Agreement in 1935, allowing for the Kriegsmarine to grow to 35% of the size of the Royal Navy. Had the conditions of the Treaty of Versailles been followed, war would have been inevitably prevented from occurring, thus removing the opportunity for Germany to have waged war in Europe. Historian WN Medlicott states in ‘The Coming of War’ (1939); ‘Throughout, from the days of Mein Kampf until 1944, the objective was the black-soil region of Russia and east Europe generally, as living space for German colonists’. WN Medlicott argues the line that Hitler never wavered in his long term aims but that like Bismarck, he was an opportunist, willing to change policy along the way if the situation demanded. Medlicott argues that there is a consistency in Hitler’s thinking from the days of Mein Kampf to the Hossbach Memorandum to his wartime table-talk. Therefore, it is clear that the policy of appeasement contributed to the growth of European tensions. 
The principle of collective security was the great idealistic hope of the inter-war period. It was believed that the powers, working through the League of Nations, could work together to prevent aggression and the chain of events which had led to war in 1914. Collective security collapsed, unable to handle the realities of European and world politics. This collapse meant there was no means to stop the aggression of the Axis powers whose actions increased the tensions in Europe. The only response to this aggression came in the form of appeasement which was doomed to fail. The League of Nations was split into three structures including the Council, Assembly and the Secretariat. However, the League of Nations failed due to relying on the principle of ‘internationalism’, the notion that nations would sacrifice selfish national gain for the common good. The League’s aim of disarmament rested on a fatal contradiction. Article 8 called for powers to disarm to a level consistent with national safety. Collective security was unable to function die to the realities of European and world politics. The failure of collective security enabled the dictators to act without fear of any retribution. Each action of Hitler and Mussolini further acted to heighten tensions in Europe. Manchuria showed them the way.
Hitler and Stalin signed a Non-Aggression Pact due to Britain’s guarantee to Poland made a war in the west inevitable. Hopefully, Hitler would exhaust himself against France and Britain. A deal with Hitler would give Stalin a share of Poland and provide a security buffer between Germany and Russia. With Hitler busy in the west, Russia would have time to consolidate and strengthen its forces. The Soviet Union could be dealt with once the western nations had been defeated and neutralising the Soviet Union would avoid getting into the mess Germany found itself in July/August 1914. The Nazi-Soviet Non Aggression Pact was officially signed on the 23rd of August, 1939. Germany and the Soviet Union signed a ten year non-aggression pact. This pact was significant as it was the catalyst for the German invasion into Poland. Article 2 stated; “If either Germany or Russia become involved in a war with a third power, the other would not get involved”, for example if Germany invade Poland, Russia would not intervene. Article 7 stated;  “The agreement would take immediate effect”. The Nazi-Soviet Pact significantly contained secret protocols which created German and Soviet spheres of influence. Germany would receive western Poland and Lithuania. The Soviet Union would receive Estonia, Latvia, Finland and Romania. Phillip Bell states in the Origins of the Second World War in Europe; “Instead of risk a war, they could offer certain neutrality ... spheres of influence and were ready to carve up Poland .. the Germans could deliver the goods forthwith, whereas the British and French could deliver nothing. Bell poses the questions, why did Stalin choose the Germans over the British and French in August 1939. He places much of the blame on Britain’s hesitancy, lack of seriousness and its distrust of Stalin. However, he  argues that the decisive reason was that Hitler offered Stalin what he wanted, and offered it immeadiatly. Stalin was involved in skirmishes with Japan in the far east. The last thing he needed was a two-front war. He sought certain neutrality and hoped for a band of states in eastern Europe which could provide some security to the Soviet state.
To conclude, it is clear that the failure of the League of Nations, the policy of appeasement and the signing of the Nazi-Soviet Non Aggression Pact significantly contributed to the growth of tensions in Europe. The following factors as listed above contributed to both Germany and Italy seizing power and allowed for them to expand their empires.
 





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« Reply #745 on: September 12, 2017, 09:34:30 pm »
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Hello Susie,

My Modern History teacher is very vague in giving feedback. Could you please review my essay (if you have time) and could you please give some moderate feedback. Thanks, Isho.

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« Reply #746 on: September 19, 2017, 02:56:45 pm »
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People doing Indochina: how would you answer this? It's from the 2015 HSC so I've spoilered it in case you're about to do the paper.

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Assess the impact of the Tet Offensive on the anti-war movements in the USA.

Just not sure if I have enough content to talk about this in enough detail. The only things I can think of are it
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led to a massive increase in support for the protestors
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eventually led to the end of the anti-war movement as the US government gradually withdrew its troops following Tet.

What else can I include?

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« Reply #747 on: September 22, 2017, 10:50:52 pm »
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Hey guys just a quick Germany question, our teacher gave us a couple of tricky questions to look at and I'm a bit stumped on how to approach this one structurally and in terms of what specifically I need to look at: Explain how political and economic factors affected the Weimar Republic by 1929.
I'm pretty confused as to how to handle this as I can discuss how the economic issues had a limited impact as they were well handled by Stresseman. However, I can't really discuss the Great Depression that much seeing that it broke out in 1929 and this essay question limits me to 1929. Thanks guys :)
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« Reply #748 on: September 22, 2017, 11:13:09 pm »
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Hey guys just a quick Germany question, our teacher gave us a couple of tricky questions to look at and I'm a bit stumped on how to approach this one structurally and in terms of what specifically I need to look at: Explain how political and economic factors affected the Weimar Republic by 1929.
I'm pretty confused as to how to handle this as I can discuss how the economic issues had a limited impact as they were well handled by Stresseman. However, I can't really discuss the Great Depression that much seeing that it broke out in 1929 and this essay question limits me to 1929. Thanks guys :)

oooooh. structure-wise, i can only think of separating it into two paragraphs - political and economic (your essay looks like there's no paragraphs this way which is annoying). as for your question on how to discuss economic issues, i think you should maintain the argument of the economic issues having a limited impact because of stresemann... like to a certain extent, all problems were fixed because of him. on the great depression, sure, it happened in 1929, but you can talk about the immediate impacts of the great depression (can't help you out here, haven't studied weimar germany in so long).

hope this helps!
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« Reply #749 on: September 22, 2017, 11:19:34 pm »
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oooooh. structure-wise, i can only think of separating it into two paragraphs - political and economic (your essay looks like there's no paragraphs this way which is annoying). as for your question on how to discuss economic issues, i think you should maintain the argument of the economic issues having a limited impact because of stresemann... like to a certain extent, all problems were fixed because of him. on the great depression, sure, it happened in 1929, but you can talk about the immediate impacts of the great depression (can't help you out here, haven't studied weimar germany in so long).

hope this helps!
sorry i couldn't help you out more - weimar germany is not my speciality in the national study, and i haven't studied it in ages :/

nah that's all good! really appreciate it :)
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