Hii!! When you guys have a free minute (lectures were awesome!!!) looking at my intro for a discovery question would be very much appreciated thankyou!
The process of discovery can be a complex one and can lead to significant change. Discuss this statement with reference to your prescribed text and ONE text of your own choosing.
Hey Snew! So glad you could come to our lectures, I wish I got to meet you!
Here's some feedback on your intro in bold font:
The multifaceted nature of discovery holds the power to challenge and confront perspectives, often resulting in significant and meaningful change for individuals. However, the extent of the impact of discovery is ultimately determined by an individual willingness to embrace the process, allowing for it to become a transformative experience.
I like this - you've carved yourself a little niche that comes from the bigger scheme of the question. Really well done. William Shakespeare’s romantic comedy The Tempest explores the physical discovery of the island, its subsequent influence on Prospero’s initial desires for revenge and how this is reshaped into his true desire of forgiveness. Similarly in Jane Austen’s novel Pride and Prejudice, Elizabeth and Darcy’s interactions and critiques of one another subsequently reveal their own faults, prompting self-reflection as well as renewed perspective of one another.
I'd put one more sentence here looking more specifically at the "complex" nature of discovery. Something perhaps about, "The nature of discovery is evidently experienced in complex and diverse ways..." (this is just a basic example) - something like this rounds off your intro, but also directly responds to the "complex" wording in the question. Hope this helps!