Hello Anotherworld2b, glad to see you here on this thread over the other one.
For the hypothesis, you need it to be longer using IF...THEN...BECAUSE
As for the experimental group, the control should've have been a plain substance such as regular water and then the variables should be something like a diuretic (like coffee) and an anti-diuretic/substance that is not as diuretic as water.
This is probably the error you are concerned about, there also may be issues with the experimental group having full bladders BEFORE consuming coffee or cordial which may have affected the results.
Caffeine IS a Diuretic so it does increase urine production (to remove the toxin from the body), as for cordial, I'm not sure of the diuretic properties so I cannot say for sure whether it is or not, but it would be safe to assume it's not a diuretic and it was an error with the experimental group when the experiment was conducted.
Your discussion should explain the validity, reliability and accuracy, indicating how you can improve upon all 3 of them, and you should DEFINITELY explain what should have happened so you acknowledge that the experiment was flawed, what the expected result was, why you didn't achieve that and how it can be improved in the future.
Hope this helps, Skidous