Could I please get some essay feedback??? Thank you :)

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mani.s_

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Could I please get some essay feedback??? Thank you :)

« on: April 01, 2020, 04:36:56 pm »

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Hi, I was wondering If I could get feedback on my essay on Henry Lawson's short stories.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank you!

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MoanaAbadael

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Re: Could I please get some essay feedback??? Thank you :)

« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2020, 05:54:29 pm »

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Is this for a Multimodal presentation?? if so then your introduction is a dat bit long.

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mani.s_

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Re: Could I please get some essay feedback??? Thank you :)

« Reply #2 on: April 01, 2020, 06:05:13 pm »

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Quote from: MoanaAbadael on April 01, 2020, 05:54:29 pm

Is this for a Multimodal presentation?? if so then your introduction is a dat bit long.

no this is just a essay, not for a multimodal

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