I've just revived my sports med marks back from last term and i'm not too happy... i was marked down on an answer in regards to children and athletes because my "example was weak"... I have enclosed it below and was just wondering how I could make it stronger? A lot of girls in my class thing they mark unreasonable!
Epilepsy is the disruption of brain function, which causes a brief alteration to the level of consciousness and results in seizures or fits. Coaches, trainers, parents or supervisors should know what to do if a seizure occurs. Children and young athletes should follow their doctor’s advice on what activities they should partake in, but generally most sports are safe to participate in. However, if a child is prone to have seizures regularly, they should avoid high contact sports such as rugby league. In addition to, rock climbing and scuba diving should also be avoided, as there is an increased risk of harm if the individual loses consciousness. For example; a child with epiplepsy playing soccer should ensure his coach is aware of of the issue. The trainers would advise the opposing team to especially avoid contact as it may instigate seizure. If an attack were to occur during the soccer match; the child should not be restrained, obstacles should be moved away and their head should be supported. To manage epilepsy, children and young athletes should keep hydrated, shouldn’t be overtrained and they should avoid stressful situations.