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Title: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Joseph41 on October 22, 2019, 01:45:06 pm
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Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: yourfriendlyneighbourhoodghost on October 29, 2019, 08:38:40 am
I just want to say good luck to everyone. We have made it this far and for sure, all our effort and hard work will pay off.
Don't over think things and trust yourself that you have done enough and that you have the power to smash these exams.

We will all ace it (:
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: yourfriendlyneighbourhoodghost on October 29, 2019, 08:43:41 am
I actually do have a question, what type of paper is used in the exam and is it hard to write in the booklet?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: brenden on October 29, 2019, 09:28:06 am
I actually do have a question, what type of paper is used in the exam and is it hard to write in the booklet?
It'll be similar to your Studio exam - just regular printer paper with lines through it... not difficult to write in at all :)
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: yourfriendlyneighbourhoodghost on October 29, 2019, 12:44:01 pm
It'll be similar to your Studio exam - just regular printer paper with lines through it... not difficult to write in at all :)

That's good (: I thought it would be glossy paper or something lol. Thanks (:
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Joseph41 on October 30, 2019, 12:23:21 pm
How was it?!
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: phurley375 on October 30, 2019, 12:39:39 pm
How was it?!

Stressful, nerve-racking.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Joseph41 on October 30, 2019, 12:41:26 pm
Stressful, nerve-racking.

Congrats for getting through. :) Mostly as expected?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: drops on October 30, 2019, 12:47:49 pm
Much easier than previous years...
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Remy33 on October 30, 2019, 12:49:25 pm
Much easier than previous years...
dafuq

My hand is literally about to fall off.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: lleeea on October 30, 2019, 12:53:09 pm
Much easier than previous years...
I gues it was a bit easy, but im so annoyed coz i didnt finish  a lil bit of my last body paragraph and conclusion for lang analysis. will that affect my mark significantly in any way?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Ionic Doc on October 30, 2019, 12:56:13 pm
I gues it was a bit easy, but im so annoyed coz i didnt finish  a lil bit of my last body paragraph and conclusion for lang analysis. will that affect my mark significantly in any way?

my English teacher (who's also a vcaa assessor) said that you need to have a conclusion in your language analysis but it doesn't get marked.
That's just what she said.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: rani_b on October 30, 2019, 01:01:03 pm
The prompts for my books were pretty fair, just disappointed because I wanted something else.

 Personally found the language analysis tough :( But on the plus side, it was pretty short!! Knew it was going to be comparative.

Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Globe on October 30, 2019, 01:07:36 pm
my English teacher (who's also a vcaa assessor) said that you need to have a conclusion in your language analysis but it doesn't get marked.
That's just what she said.

Don't stress at all, you don't need a conclusion for language analysis. I know people who got a perfect 50 and high 40's without one. It's simply not marked.

((realised i quoted the wrong comment but you get the point aha)
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Sai Ramishetty on October 30, 2019, 01:17:29 pm
Hey guys,
You know how you have to shade the boxes of your topic, what happens if you tick them(just what I did).
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: gab.r_se on October 30, 2019, 01:33:25 pm
WOW so glad that's over! That was the exam I was the most scared of.

I was pretty happy with the prompts, and I was so relieved when I saw the size of the article. It was really easy to understand, as well.

Good luck with the rest of your exams, everyone!
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: forsande on October 30, 2019, 01:33:34 pm
Fuck, I didn't analyse the pictures. I thought of analysing the EFTPOS machine picture but I had no idea what it meant and why it was even there.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: NomotivationF on October 30, 2019, 01:35:58 pm
Did you guys fall asleep reading the section C article?? How in the world were you supposed to analyse those visuals. Also does anyone here do Persepolis? What in the world were those topics
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: lleeea on October 30, 2019, 01:36:31 pm
Hey guys,
You know how you have to shade the boxes of your topic, what happens if you tick them(just what I did).
omfg i did that as well!!!
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: NomotivationF on October 30, 2019, 01:38:17 pm
Fuck, I didn't analyse the pictures. I thought of analysing the EFTPOS machine picture but I had no idea what it meant and why it was even there.

Omg yes I know right??? Also my mind completely blanked and I forgot what the EFTPOS machine was actually called!!! I referred to it as a ‘mini-atm.’ The examiner is going to think I’m missing a brain
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: forsande on October 30, 2019, 01:42:01 pm
Omg yes I know right??? Also my mind completely blanked and I forgot what the EFTPOS machine was actually called!!! I referred to it as a ‘mini-atm.’ The examiner is going to think I’m missing a brain
but wtf where you supposed to say to that? i didn't even see the point in adding the picture in
i cooked section c badly, im pretty sure i retold the story more than I analysed it.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Sine on October 30, 2019, 01:42:30 pm
my English teacher (who's also a vcaa assessor) said that you need to have a conclusion in your language analysis but it doesn't get marked.
That's just what she said.
Re: Conclusion

idk about it not being marked - whatever you do on the page will be considered when formulating a mark but the conclusion on its own is not 100% necessary most people will just chuck the conclusion at the end of the last body paragraph for language analysis in a couple of sentences. Also yes you can ultimately still get 9-10/10 even if you don't have a conclusion.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: yourfriendlyneighbourhoodghost on October 30, 2019, 01:46:47 pm
How was it?!

For some reason, I lowkey enjoyed it and found it fun lol, it was pretty good, for me.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: yourfriendlyneighbourhoodghost on October 30, 2019, 01:48:47 pm
Fuck, I didn't analyse the pictures. I thought of analysing the EFTPOS machine picture but I had no idea what it meant and why it was even there.

Yeah I found that difficult too, I didn't even know it was called an EFTPOS I just wrote card scanner lol oops.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Lear on October 30, 2019, 01:52:30 pm
Just a friendly reminder that your overall exam mark will not be decided by small things such as missing the conclusion or using the wrong terminology a couple of times. Examiners understand this is a highly stressed examination. Your essay will be marked overall on how well you have conveyed your points, used the best pieces of evidence, structured your response and analysed.

Congratulations on finishing your first VCE exam and now it's time to stop dwelling on this one and focusing on the next :)

Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: TheIllusion on October 30, 2019, 02:07:55 pm
Seems like everybody had trouble with the EFTPOS machine.
I called it a "credit card machine" lol
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Sai Ramishetty on October 30, 2019, 02:10:19 pm
Just a friendly reminder that your overall exam mark will not be decided by small things such as missing the conclusion or using the wrong terminology a couple of times. Examiners understand this is a highly stressed examination. Your essay will be marked overall on how well you have conveyed your points, used the best pieces of evidence, structured your response and analysed.

Congratulations on finishing your first VCE exam and now it's time to stop dwelling on this one and focusing on the next :)
Does that include not worrying whether you put a tick or shade on the boxes?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Coloratura on October 30, 2019, 02:12:03 pm
I forgot to freaking analyse the visuals for section C, and I feel like an idiot because I usually don't forget such things. Ughhhhhhhhh.

Anyone know how much this will impact my score, by not including a visual analysis for section C?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: TheIllusion on October 30, 2019, 02:28:32 pm
I forgot to freaking analyse the visuals for section C, and I feel like an idiot because I usually don't forget such things. Ughhhhhhhhh.

Anyone know how much this will impact my score, by not including a visual analysis for section C?
We had some people in my class like this.
Our English teacher (former VCAA examiner) said it's common the students to miss the visuals.
However she said some past students from our school have missed the visual analysis and managed to do quite well.
Probably will depend on the quality of your other points of analysis.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: PhoenixxFire on October 30, 2019, 02:30:13 pm
Does that include not worrying whether you put a tick or shade on the boxes?
They ask you to shade the box because it will be scanned and shading shows up better. A tick should still be visible though, and if it's not they'll figure it out from looking at your piece.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: JeKnYan on October 30, 2019, 02:43:34 pm
Ah shit, here we go again

https://www.google.com.au/maps/place/Hailey+Express/@51.7954063,-1.4861399,17z/data=!4m7!3m6!1s0x4876cc53df9da76d:0x7e228f69bc41f05!8m2!3d51.7954063!4d-1.4839459!9m1!1b1?hl=en-GB&authuser=0

https://imgur.com/gallery/9eyOTb2
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: PhoenixxFire on October 30, 2019, 03:04:11 pm
Ah shit, here we go again

https://www.google.com.au/maps/place/Hailey+Express/@51.7954063,-1.4861399,17z/data=!4m7!3m6!1s0x4876cc53df9da76d:0x7e228f69bc41f05!8m2!3d51.7954063!4d-1.4839459!9m1!1b1?hl=en-GB&authuser=0

https://imgur.com/gallery/9eyOTb2
Given you've posted it here too, I'm going to repeat myself here.

Leaving negative reviews on a small business is not a joke and is not harmless. It can genuinely effect their sales as well as causing significant stress to the owners who are bombarded out of nowhere.

I'd urge you all to refrain from participating in or encouraging this behaviour.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Stancev on October 30, 2019, 03:31:39 pm
I can’t remember if I shaded the box of my text or the for which question I did. Will they just not look at it? I feel like it would be pretty easy to see which one it was, but would they even try and read it?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: PhoenixxFire on October 30, 2019, 03:38:00 pm
I can’t remember if I shaded the box of my text or the for which question I did. Will they just not look at it? I feel like it would be pretty easy to see which one it was, but would they even try and read it?
You'll be fine. Heaps of people do it every year, they'll work it out from your writing.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: JeromeTT on October 30, 2019, 03:39:09 pm
I can’t remember if I shaded the box of my text or the for which question I did. Will they just not look at it? I feel like it would be pretty easy to see which one it was, but would they even try and read it?
Yes, they would try to deduce which question you did. They will still mark your work don't stress.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: bay0007 on October 30, 2019, 04:00:13 pm
If I analysed the image as a happy customer rather than Hailey, will this impact my score?

Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: jinaede1342 on October 30, 2019, 04:04:05 pm
Not gonna lie, kinda disappointed that the language analysis was so straightforward...the exam is supposed to be accessible to everyone but still manage to differentiate people. There wasn't much that was complex to work with... :(

at least its over tho!
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Amnilauv on October 30, 2019, 04:10:24 pm
If I analysed the image as a happy customer rather than Hailey, will this impact my score?
My thoughts are that the pictures are ambiguous, so however the way you interpret it (given that it is plausible) should not impact your score.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: hello876 on October 30, 2019, 04:16:26 pm
What did everyone think of the Photograph 51/Penelopiad prompts?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: galaxy21 on October 30, 2019, 04:39:33 pm
How much will not finishing half of a paragraph for section B influence my score? I didn't get time to talk about one of the texts in the last paragraph! How much will this bring my score down??
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: bay0007 on October 30, 2019, 05:27:00 pm
What did everyone think of the Photograph 51/Penelopiad prompts?

Not ideal, both fairly limited in terms of incorporating all aspects of the text.
Had expected something on storytelling or fate
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: tofudahyun on October 30, 2019, 05:56:45 pm
So if i forgot to mention the tone of the second piece and didn't have time to analyse the last three chunks of the first article (still got down 4.5 pages), how severely will i be penalised?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: pargol12 on October 30, 2019, 06:03:04 pm
what were the two given prompts for section b (crucible and year of wonders)
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Sine on October 30, 2019, 06:09:30 pm
So if i forgot to mention the tone of the second piece and didn't have time to analyse the last three chunks of the first article (still got down 4.5 pages), how severely will i be penalised?
As others have already alluded to the way English assessors mark your essays is not explicitly against a criteria sheet so making minor errors or omissions won't destroy your marks - it would actually be impossible for anyone to fully analyse anything within the timeframe so you are generally mostly marked on what you have written down (not what you have missed out on) obviously they want a proper structure though.

You won't be directly penalised for missing out on the tone/certain aspects of the article but if the omission takes away or you didn't analyse enough (in the opinion of the assessor) from your final piece you may not score as highly as you would if you had been able to include all that stuff.

How much will not finishing half of a paragraph for section B influence my score? I didn't get time to talk about one of the texts in the last paragraph! How much will this bring my score down??
See above.

Anecdotally I know some people who have got 50's without finishing their final paragraphs/not doing conclusion so if the rest of your essay is fine I wouldn't be too worried. Missing out on a little bit of 1 paragraph will not make the assessor disregard everything else you have written down.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Macrophagee on October 30, 2019, 06:13:51 pm
What did everyone think of the Frankenstein and Invictus/Ransom prompts?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Arshaan2001 on October 30, 2019, 06:18:22 pm
Wait, what did the P.51/The penelopiad prompts have to do with fate?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: rani_b on October 30, 2019, 06:19:48 pm
Not ideal, both fairly limited in terms of incorporating all aspects of the text.
Had expected something on storytelling or fate

:( I wish it had been on storytelling!

I found it weird they made the first one so specific to "Rosalind and Penelope", because then I had to justify bringing the Maids into the discussion. I had wanted to also talk about Helen! I wish it had just been "female determination".

Ehh anyway it's all over now! Hope everyone went well!!
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: jinaede1342 on October 30, 2019, 06:25:37 pm
What did everyone think of the Frankenstein and Invictus/Ransom prompts?

Can't comment on Invictus/Ransom but I thought the Frankenstein prompts were fairly decent. Both of them lended themselves to a character based essay more so than a thematic response (like 2018 for example when the prompts explicitly mentioned 'knowledge' and 'injustice')

Any thoughts on Crucible/YOW?
Didn't mention anything about authorial intrusions and epilogues ughhh

on an unrelated note I can't believe there are still 5 more exams left  :-\ is it normal to feel this unprepared... I can't help but ruminate on the English exam even though I know this is counterproductive 
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Arshaan2001 on October 30, 2019, 06:25:50 pm
Yeh in my opinion, the arrogance topic was pretty broad, i needed to talk about, so you can maneuver it around
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: pugs on October 30, 2019, 06:38:38 pm
Can't comment on Invictus/Ransom but I thought the Frankenstein prompts were fairly decent. Both of them lended themselves to a character based essay more so than a thematic response (like 2018 for example when the prompts explicitly mentioned 'knowledge' and 'injustice')

Any thoughts on Crucible/YOW?
Didn't mention anything about authorial intrusions and epilogues ughhh

on an unrelated note I can't believe there are still 5 more exams left  :-\ is it normal to feel this unprepared... I can't help but ruminate on the English exam even though I know this is counterproductive
i found the crucible/yow prompts kind of difficult ?? maybe it was because i guess i was underprepared, but i thought they were pretty limiting :/ idk that's just me though

--> also adding onto everyone's language analysis discussion
i found the arguments clear, but was i the only one who found very few striking persuasive techniques/argument set up for Hailey's piece? the second one was a bit better bc it was more obvious, but i found the first one slightly more subtle (there were some areas that were quite straightforward, but i found it pretty repetitive :l)

and yes @ the comments on the business, especially as this one is from the UK so they have absolutely no idea what is going on (but still, don't do it to any business)
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: smamsmo22 on October 30, 2019, 07:29:04 pm
Hey guys,
You know how you have to shade the boxes of your topic, what happens if you tick them(just what I did).

I forgot to even mark a box last year and nothing happened; they'll figure it out. You'll be fine (:
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: bay0007 on October 30, 2019, 08:16:37 pm
:( I wish it had been on storytelling!

I found it weird they made the first one so specific to "Rosalind and Penelope", because then I had to justify bringing the Maids into the discussion. I had wanted to also talk about Helen! I wish it had just been "female determination".

Ehh anyway it's all over now! Hope everyone went well!!

Completely agree, I went with that prompt and couldn't help but feel restricted. I did manage to incorporate several of the other characters but wasn't easy to justify it and stay on track.

Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: bay0007 on October 30, 2019, 08:17:22 pm
Wait, what did the P.51/The penelopiad prompts have to do with fate?

They didn't. I had expected/hoped they would.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: jkay__ on October 30, 2019, 08:40:12 pm
Did everyone here finish?

I didn't do conclusions for either Seciton B or C :(
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: rani_b on October 30, 2019, 09:07:47 pm
Did everyone here finish?

I didn't do conclusions for either Seciton B or C :(

Hey, don't worry if you didn't write a conclusion (esp. for Section C, as it isn't an explicit requirement and more of a formality). As long as you had substance and depth in your paragraphs, those will be getting the bulk, if not all, of the marks. Sometimes when ppl do write conclusions, they add  very little value to the essay, and you would rather spend that time improving the scope of your analysis in the actual essay :)
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: 38millyy on October 30, 2019, 11:21:02 pm
 finished all sections but for section c (mainstream English) , didn't analyse the images for some dumb reason and now feel like dying....  :'( :'( :'(  If the essay is good, how will not analysing the images affect the score???  was aiming for an 8/10 for section c  :'(  :'(
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Pabloscopy on October 31, 2019, 01:08:21 am
I think I screwed up my language analysis a bit. Didn't read that the the writer was Hailey so I just wrote that the store wrote it, and wasn't able to finish my paragraph about the comment. Hopefully my text response was good enough to compensate my language analysis
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: spursy on October 31, 2019, 12:00:56 pm
in my conclusion for the language analysis I only wrote about the closing stages of sam morricones letter but didnt give an overall conclusion about both articles. Will this significantly affect my marks?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: TheIllusion on October 31, 2019, 12:21:41 pm
in my conclusion for the language analysis I only wrote about the closing stages of sam morricones letter but didnt give an overall conclusion about both articles. Will this significantly affect my marks?
Yeah, I kinda did the same. :(
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: conono7747 on October 31, 2019, 01:09:18 pm
Other than the really obvious part they put in for connotations ('breeze' connotes weightlessness and tranquility without 'wads of bills') that most people did, barely anything in the language. It ended up being an 90% argument analysis. what did people say about the pictures? Mine were handshake=personal connection/understanding to customer knowing what they want, card machine= questioning reliability of new tech. Not great tbh. Anyone catch any good ones?
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Jim_Bob on October 31, 2019, 01:39:17 pm
Other than the really obvious part they put in for connotations ('breeze' connotes weightlessness and tranquility without 'wads of bills') that most people did, barely anything in the language. It ended up being an 90% argument analysis. what did people say about the pictures? Mine were handshake=personal connection/understanding to customer knowing what they want, card machine= questioning reliability of new tech. Not great tbh. Anyone catch any good ones?

I said the "out of service" phrase on the EFTPOS machine metaphorically alluded to (I forgot the quote here) the older residents becoming out-of-place in society, or those residents who find cash seamless.
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: antigony on October 31, 2019, 02:08:57 pm
Other than the really obvious part they put in for connotations ('breeze' connotes weightlessness and tranquility without 'wads of bills') that most people did, barely anything in the language. It ended up being an 90% argument analysis. what did people say about the pictures? Mine were handshake=personal connection/understanding to customer knowing what they want, card machine= questioning reliability of new tech. Not great tbh. Anyone catch any good ones?
A bit of a stretch, but I mentioned that the use of asyndeton in the headline embodied the efficiency of electronic payment systems. Article was kinda bland imo :/
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Jobananarama on October 31, 2019, 03:03:21 pm
Anyone know to what extent I might lose marks for not completing 1/2 of argument analysis? I finished the other two essays, thought the first was really good, but wasn't able to complete LA. My first paragraph is pretty long for it though and has a bunch of comparison/analysis but only really managed to cover the first third of each piece...
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: yourfriendlyneighbourhoodghost on October 31, 2019, 03:50:54 pm
Other than the really obvious part they put in for connotations ('breeze' connotes weightlessness and tranquility without 'wads of bills') that most people did, barely anything in the language. It ended up being an 90% argument analysis. what did people say about the pictures? Mine were handshake=personal connection/understanding to customer knowing what they want, card machine= questioning reliability of new tech. Not great tbh. Anyone catch any good ones?

I also stated the handshake thing and that it is a homely and personal vibe Haley is trying to create, for the machine thing I was soo stumped I just made up that the store is only interested in collecting your money, hence the receipts and when you want service they abandon you. Idk
Title: Re: VCE English Exam - 30/10/19 - Discussion/Questions/Solutions
Post by: Matthew_Whelan on October 31, 2019, 04:21:44 pm
I also stated the handshake thing and that it is a homely and personal vibe Haley is trying to create, for the machine thing I was soo stumped I just made up that the store is only interested in collecting your money, hence the receipts and when you want service they abandon you. Idk

I saw the eftpos with the out of service message as symbolising a flaw in Haileys argument, in which “what happens when eftpos isn’t working?” (which is a fair point imo)  and reinforces their argument that cashless spending is actually inconvenient.
The two images for the most part reflect the agenda of the authors.