Mark my essay Identity and belonging

[k31453]

can anybody mark my essay out of 10 ??

plzzz

[Mr. Study]

Constructive Criticism : Re-Read your essay thoroughly! I have been told many times that I had to re-read my essays, as  my grammar, and punctuation, were questionable.

Reading through your essay, I noticed quite a number of sentences that weren't very ... 'correct' questionable. (I can't think of the correct word right now ... Too tired...). Try reading your essays out loud, I've been doing this and it helps quite a bit!

I doubt I can mark this (I'm terrible at English) but what I can say is you should aim to make your essays longer. (800 -1200. This is a general number and note, I only 'pulled' this number from what my teachers expect in SACs).

Erm, If you really want, I can try and mark this (In the end, we would both benefit) .... Though it would be very questionable and even if I did, everyone would have pitchforks on me. Haha.

[Yendall]

I've attached my corrections. Please take these corrections as constructive criticism. I haven't read the text, so I made no comment on textual relevancy, I simply corrected grammatical and vocabulary-relevant errors.

[k31453]

Constructive Criticism : Re-Read your essay thoroughly! I have been told many times that I had to re-read my essays, as  my grammar, and punctuation, were questionable.

Reading through your essay, I noticed quite a number of sentences that weren't very ... 'correct' questionable. (I can't think of the correct word right now ... Too tired...). Try reading your essays out loud, I've been doing this and it helps quite a bit!

I doubt I can mark this (I'm terrible at English) but what I can say is you should aim to make your essays longer. (800 -1200. This is a general number and note, I only 'pulled' this number from what my teachers expect in SACs).

Erm, If you really want, I can try and mark this (In the end, we would both benefit) .... Though it would be very questionable and even if I did, everyone would have pitchforks on me. Haha.

That would be good if u mark it out of 10 !! thanks

[Mr. Study]

Hey, I'll private message you a 'corrected' essay. Just give me 30 mins.

[Mr. Study]

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