And remember, you're always free to write a few sentences with embedded quotes, and post them asking for us to check if you've done the embedding right. Or whatever your issue is. Just work on fixing up the small stuff, and we're happy to check it over.
If you get a comment like 'needs to be more complex', ALWAYS ask the teacher exactly what they mean, because that's something pretty broad and intangible you can't work on. What you want is a list of really specific things to do.
Hey...sorry to bother you about this again. I know all of you are sick of "Can I get a XX" posts, but this has been really bugging me.
I've been working really hard for English, reading sample essays, dissecting their structure and all that and I think I'm getting better. My question is, "Am I already screwed?". I'm in the middle of my cohort (a little above, maybe in the top 40%) and I've been getting 'Mediums' (6-7) for all my SACs except one (8, High). We have one SAC left (TX for Stasiland, I think I'll do Mabo in the final exam). If I manage to get them up in time for the exam, can I still get a high 30/low 40? I've seen heaps of "You need 3 A's to get 38" around the net, and I'm hoping I'll get something like "B B A"...as I'm aiming for around 8 in each essay". Anyways...
Thanks friend.