Hi there, could you say, give us an example of your writing, maybe 100 or so words ? 
First Attempt:Through the use of various artistic techniques, Drysdale has composed the modern painting entitled The Rabbiters, in which he has created a sense of drama. The artwork consists of very dull, unhappy tones of colours in which it creates a sense of anxiety and as if something tragic is going to occur. The addition, of ratio between humans and natural land components results to a very drastic outcome as dominance between the people and the large boulders creates a sense of drama. When something dominates another thing, the image of loss and tragedy images in the audience’s mind some sort of bad tension. The composition of the land also gives drama to the overall painting as a result of how the land components are eroded from its original form. Erosion of land is the key component of the structure of the land as erosion of land results in tragedy due to the loss of the natural beauty of the uninterrupted land. The trees falling from their roots with the addition of the oversized boulders (as the result from the ratio of others elements of the artwork) gives definition of what has happened. As seen on the top sides of the artwork, it is evident that there is a sudden occurrence of destruction, seen through the sharp cut-off of the natural land. The inclusion of the people’s body composition conveys to the audience that they are inspecting the land for something. However, since they are inspecting the eroded land, it gives a sense of tension and anxiety because they might be buried in land if more erosion occurs. Drysdale’s artwork has successfully portrayed the sense of drama through the use of specific visual techniques in which when all combined together, composes an artwork that makes the audience think a certain way, in this context, it is the drama of the situation.
Second attempt:
Through the use of various artistic techniques, Drysdale has composed the modern painting entitled The Rabbiters, in which he has created a sense of drama. The artwork consists of very dull, dusty desert like tones of colours in which it creates a sense of anxiety and as if something tragic is going to occur in the Australian outback landscape. The addition, of ratio between humans and natural land components results to a very drastic outcome as dominance between the people and the large boulders creates a sense of drama. When something dominates another figure, the image of loss and tragedy images in the audience’s mind some sort of bad tension. The composition of the land also gives drama to the overall painting as a result of how the land components are eroded from its original form. Erosion of land is the key component of the structure of the land as erosion of land results in tragedy due to the loss of the natural beauty of the uninterrupted land. The trees falling from their roots with the addition of the oversized boulders (as the result from the ratio of others elements of the artwork) gives definition of what has happened. As seen on the top sides of the artwork, it is evident that there is a sudden occurrence of destruction, seen through the sharp cut-off of the natural land. The inclusion of the people’s body composition conveys to the audience that they are inspecting the land for something. However, since they are inspecting the eroded land, it gives a sense of tension and anxiety because they might be buried in land if more erosion occurs. Drysdale’s artwork has successfully portrayed the sense of drama through the use of specific visual techniques in which when all combined together, composes an artwork that makes the audience think a certain way, in this context, it is the drama of the situation.
Third Attempt:
Various artistic techniques Drysdale has used to compose The Rabbiters provided a sense of drama. The artwork consists of very dull, dusty desert like tones of colours in which it creates a sense of anxiety and as if something tragic is going to occur in the Australian outback landscape. The addition, of ratio between humans and natural land components results to a very drastic outcome as dominance between the people and the large boulders creates a sense of drama. Through this artwork, it is seen as if Drysdale wanted to portray the themes of loss and tragedy. The composition of the land gives the effect of suspense to the overall painting. This is seen from the land components being eroded from its original form. Erosion of land is the key component of the structure of the land as erosion of land results in tragedy due to the loss of the natural beauty of the uninterrupted land. The trees falling from their roots with the addition of the oversized boulders (as the result from the ratio of others elements of the artwork) gives definition of what has happened. The top sides of the artwork, where the sharp cut-off of the cliff, portrays that there was a sudden occurrence of destruction. The inclusion of how the figures are stanced shows that they are inspecting the land for something. However, since they are inspecting the eroded land, it gives a sense of tension and anxiety because they might be buried in land if more erosion occurs. Drysdale’s artwork has successfully portrayed the sense of drama through the use of specific visual techniques in which when all combined together, composes an artwork that makes the audience think a certain way, in this context, it is the drama of the situation.
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