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sonnyangel

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Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
« on: October 16, 2017, 07:27:55 pm »
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Please be as harsh as possible and thank you in advance!! :)
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Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
« Reply #1 on: October 16, 2017, 09:08:46 pm »
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Hi
I am in yr 12 too so you might wanna wait for further advice. Since you have not received a reply from anyone else yet, here you go.
well done by the way :)
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sonnyangel

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Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
« Reply #2 on: October 16, 2017, 09:54:12 pm »
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Thank you so much!  ;D
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Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
« Reply #3 on: October 21, 2017, 08:16:51 pm »
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hi sonnyangel, random person on atarnotes who i have never met before in real life !

I've gone through your essay, and it's really really solid. All of the things I point out are pretty minor. I hope my feedback is useful!

Well done :)
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Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
« Reply #4 on: October 22, 2017, 05:39:16 pm »
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eheheh thanks ellen!!!! your feedback was very very helpful 8)
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Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
« Reply #5 on: October 22, 2017, 05:44:07 pm »
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I'm glad! And I'm happy to give feedback for any more that you post  ;D
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